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[Otabe Sakura] Tonari no Hana wa Akai | The red flower nearby (COMIC HOTMiLK 2013-11) [English]

[おたべさくら] 隣の花は赤い (コミックホットミルク 2013年11月号) [英訳]

Manga
Posted:2013-12-06 15:32
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:17.56 MiB
Length:24 pages
Favorited:677 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.46

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Posted on 06 December 2013, 15:32 by:   zhantshen    PM
Uploader Comment
For all those people who vote this gallery for two star or less:

Thank you for your effort in discouraging the volunteers behind all those hard work to bring you a piece of Japanese hentai manga.
We appreciate your dislike and will remember it by heart.

Nah, I don't really care how you think.
Posted on 06 December 2013, 16:14 by:   widowchaser    PM
Score +72
@zhantshen- What's with the 'tude, brah? You got 5 stars. Seems most everybody who looked in gave enough of a fuck to give you top marks. I give enough of a fuck to say Thank You too.
Posted on 06 December 2013, 16:19 by:   Sabado001    PM
Score +26
the short hair girlfriend did cheat too? i didnt get the last page
Posted on 06 December 2013, 16:22 by:   sypha    PM
Score +793
I find it a bit troublesome when an uploader is so sensitive as to begin causing drama over ratings.

The rating system is seldom indicative of very much, except when the numbers reach a large amount. There are certain times of day where any new english gallery is guaranteed to get seven to eight 1-stars just because(I have assumed there is some specific country's viewers doing this,) and the ratings balance out later when more english natives begin seeing it.

Ehentai galleries are not an upvote or a downvote rating system. It is a one to five star system, with everything between, intended to average a score out and - hopefully - reflect something of its overall quality in the end.

Most translations are volunteer work, and while there is some great care in editing in this work, of the sort I greatly appreciate seeing, there are also numerous spelling and grammatical errors within. If it is your implication that this gallery deserves nothing but five star ratings "just because", I will inform you bluntly that you are in error.
Posted on 06 December 2013, 16:52 by:   iPoodTouch    PM
Score +25
You can't always wish for a happy ending all the time.
So at the end they both cheated... WinWin?

@zhantsen thx for the upload.
Posted on 06 December 2013, 17:06 by:   zhantshen    PM
Score +238
@sypha
Sorry for troubling you, The Description was meant to be a joke than a actual rant since I don't think anyone who voted a gallery with a low rating would look into it. The gallery itself is a comparison between it's Chinese counterpart. Seeing how vast Chinese translation work here has less than 1 rating during the first few votes, I wanted see if the same thing happens to English translated work.

Sorry for all the spelling and grammatical errors within.I totally forgot to proofread it.Still, I hope it won't affect much on how you enjoy the mange itself.

Note to myself: God I need proofreading.
Posted on 06 December 2013, 17:08 by:   wataleslie    PM
Score +45
Those two aren't dating in the first place. Pg 3 right bottom panel, girl whispers to guy. They're probably accomplice in crime, who both love to have sex with other partners (basically cheating) or worse yet, to ruin a beautiful relationship.

Though I wouldn't call the cute couples a beautiful relationship, seeing how the guy is easily swayed and not doing his girlfriend.
Posted on 06 December 2013, 17:10 by:   hihohahi    PM
Score -54
If living in 3rd world countries teaches me anything, it's 'never complain about free stuff, appreciate them.'
Posted on 06 December 2013, 17:13 by:   Seiguld    PM
Score -41
Tch, I still can't get over frustration in seeing someone play with people's feelings.

I give it full 5 stars for helping me realized this once more, and my personal taste has nothing to do with the quality of the work anyway.
Posted on 06 December 2013, 17:28 by:   Arutima    PM
Score +14
@Sabado001 The other's girl's boyfriend seems to be ready to give it a try, at the end.
Posted on 06 December 2013, 18:24 by:   Loccsta    PM
Score +24
sluts too stronk
Posted on 06 December 2013, 19:23 by:   lapan    PM
Score +122
@sypha

I don't see "great care in editing" either. Some bubbles have some uncleaned dust in them, others are cleaned over the lines of the boxes. The text also isn't properly centered in many bubbles.

While I'm thankful for translations, please let someone take a look at the final product before releasing it.
Posted on 06 December 2013, 19:26 by:   FireRage    PM
Score +120
Censoring the words pussy and dick in a hentai? Ahahahahah, really?
Posted on 06 December 2013, 21:06 by:   Granten    PM
Score +44
@zhantshen, haven't read this yet and haven't rated it (and I usually don't rate them). But if a lot of people were giving it two stars, maybe you should try to figure out why instead of complaining that people don't like something.
Posted on 06 December 2013, 21:21 by:   Monster-Girl Lover    PM
Score +28
The effort is much appreciated, however I would suggest you get an editor and/or proofreader to look over your work. Page 21 wasn't fully cleaned, for example, and some of the grammar, while readable, is still a bit off. It's still a good job, just that I know that you'd feel a bigger sense of pride and accomplishment if you got some people to help you out and make this higher in quality. Just my 2 cents, still mega thankful for the translation!
Posted on 06 December 2013, 22:56 by:   dnbdave    PM
Score +19
Well damn, all that computer support I do over the phone would be great if it were in person and could get me into a slutty schoolgirls house like that.
Posted on 07 December 2013, 01:30 by:   DualGlint    PM
Score -45
Um......

Okay... =3
Posted on 07 December 2013, 01:33 by:   rox656564    PM
Score +8
I'm more of disturbed than turned on.

@Sabado001 I'm guessing she got screwed as well so its a double cheat.
Posted on 07 December 2013, 05:59 by:   darcmistespilon    PM
Score +44
This has a lot of errors, but effort was made in translating this. Do you mind proofreading and reuploading this with less mistakes?

Also, if CGRascal can upload cursory translations and get good rating, I don't see why you need to worry yourself. As long as you admit to your mistakes, i'm fine with them, but i would be even more content if you corrected them. =)
Posted on 07 December 2013, 09:54 by:   coNTRa69    PM
Score +9
Comic San MS...we meet again.
Posted on 08 December 2013, 09:05 by:   Gaspard    PM
Score +10
Sadly the art in his other work isn't as good as in this one.. or perhaps it's cause of the editing. But i love this one for that.
Posted on 08 December 2013, 11:00 by:   Hezard    PM
Score +21
ZHANTSHEN

THE COLLECTIVE ACCEPTS YOU

WELCOME TO THE FOLD

but don't be so emo in the future.
Posted on 01 July 2017, 20:35 by:   white umbrella    PM
Score +12
page 10 if editor still here, "it's fine"
god i wish his gf doesnt get lure by the other slut's bf :(
Posted on 02 July 2018, 07:01 by:   Jizz23    PM
Score +25
For those of you who don't know this actually does have a sequel: https://e-hentai.org/s/815991046e/1071058-183

I have no idea why the translator didn't TL the sequel, but here's a short description of it, in case that the link becomes useless:

- The girlfriend ended up cheating with that other guy(she wasn't cheating prior though), but she also finds out about her boyfriend's cheating and dumps him for it.

- Years later the now ex-boyfriend bumps into the girl he was cheating with and offers her a ride, when she gets in his car she notices that he has a ring on his finger and that there's a baby car-seat in the back, so that's when she immediately tries to seduce him again. (Bitch fully intent on ruining his marriage/family, if the guy falls for it again then he's a fucking idiot.)

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