what's wrong with those boobs? they're scary.

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Thats kinda adorable. But the translated 'old lady' conversation in the last few pages is kinda wonky.

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Page 27: So... I guess we should add a 'Sound Orgy' to lists of strange yet arousing fetishes from now on? Cause I think I got a boner from this...

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Dat face on page 23... I can't even describe it

Edit: I get it, it's the cutest rape face

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Hey guys, I think Kyouko is a yamabiko, and she's an expert on voices.

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I like the story, but I feel like the translation can use a little bit of work. There's too many question marks when it's not a question, and I have to re-read a few lines to interpret their actual meaning. I appreciate that you translated it of course so I can understand it, but still, it's difficult in some parts.

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Beeg tiddy tanuki

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