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[Chiyou Yoyuchi] Midaremau Ch. 1 (COMIC MUJIN 2013-11) [English] [CGrascal]

[千要よゆち] ミダレマウ 第1話 (COMIC MUJIN 2013年11月号) [英訳]

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Posted:2013-12-18 05:54
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:19.74 MiB
Length:32 pages
Favorited:556 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.50

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Posted on 18 December 2013, 07:38 by:   Brodon    PM
Score +35
Posted on 18 December 2013, 09:36 by:   omfglol    PM
Score +156
Holy pixilated dick
Posted on 18 December 2013, 12:36 by:   procrasterbator    PM
Score +264
These kinds of "school dictatorship" settings are always so stupid.
Posted on 18 December 2013, 12:50 by:   boyfromsinga    PM
Score +49
This should be the pre-event leading to https://e-hentai.org/g/398821/f5bdd0afb4/, where her sister is the main character.
Posted on 18 December 2013, 15:01 by:   kax    PM
Score +18
The best name they could come up with is 'Boisterous Dance'?

That's the lamest sounding thing I've heard in a long time.
Posted on 19 December 2013, 08:32 by:   Loccsta    PM
Score +21
the hentai logic is strong in this one
Posted on 20 December 2013, 01:10 by:   shoeunited    PM
Score +4
We've collectively reached the fifth stage (though some of us are still at stage 4) with CGRascal.

First, we couldn't believe someone would translate like this taking from the valuable translation pool.
Second, we were angry that he wouldn't listen to constructive criticism or leave them alone for better translators.
Third, we begged for him to stop. We called upon his humanity.
Fourth, we got depressed when we realized we couldn't stop him.
Fifth, we've learned (and are learning) to accept that he is a translation hate machine that cannot be stopped.

These are the five stages of CGRascal.
Posted on 22 December 2013, 00:54 by:   jujuba2    PM
Score -37
I liked it a lot... but I wanted to see this https://e-hentai.org/g/600105/9ab4ec6c1a/ being fully translated...
I'm hoping someone to finish this, since only the first chapter was translated.

Good job anyway ;)
Posted on 14 January 2014, 07:08 by:   Lorisor    PM
Score +17
@procrasterbator

Yep and these kinds of stories(though depending on the artist, it's actually not true if the artist is a well known Vanilla artist.) almost always reach a Bad End.

I'm 85% sure that this story is going to be the same either a Bad or an Ambiguous end that alludes to a Bad End.

My guess based on this particular type of setup looks like it's going to be the notorious

*Indirectly mentally cripples the MC*

*Gives the MC a chance to fix everything once and for all*

*Regardless to if the MC succeeds or not the MC gets snubbed and thus the Bad End*

For me sometimes even when the art is Godlike I just can't stomach the story, it's different when you start a Manga/Doujin and it immediately sells you the Idea that this is NTR/Mindbreak/Hard-S-M/Bullying so you automatically know from the beginning that it's going in that direction and you get somewhat surprised IF it ends up a Good Ending(not Vanilla necessarily just a Good Ending.)

It's a different story when you make the MC a blatant "Cosmic Plaything" and the story is a "Break the Cutie"(in THIS case anyway) that's just going to end up a "Shoot the Shaggy Dog."

NOW, before people think I'm BASHING stories that are ELABORATE and have this story I'm not, but stories like these they have such a shallow feeling that the little "Ride" they take you for feels FAR too fake and you can see the "Bad End" a mile away.

I mean I actually read a Manga that had a story that ended in NTR as I expected it to only for the very next chapter to go "Surprise! NTR Reversal!" and didn't feel FORCED. Keep in mind I pretty much thought the NTR chapter was the LAST and was fine with it so the curve ball was an actual surprise.

But here it's obvious the "Curve Ball" is going to be her "Nii-san" or a "BFF Betrayl". If it ends up like the last manga I mentioned, I'll be surprised.
Posted on 08 February 2014, 16:03 by:   Tyflosion18    PM
Score +6
@lorisor

Outta curiosity what was the name of the doujin that you're referring to that had a surprise ntr reversal?
Would it have happened to be an oreimo doujin, cause I can't remember the specific name but near the end there was a very unexpected moment where the main character appears and well I won't spoil what he does but it was very entertaining to see

And I must say I wholeheartedly agree with your opinion, it's like in oyster's works you always know its gonna end up badly for the girls so it's not really entertaining reading the story unfold all that much (his artwork is superb btw one of my favourites).

I do wish there was a type of ntr reversal (a story that started out a ntr but the main char grows balls and beats the shit outta the antagonist either physically or intellectually)and that it would gain popularity as ntr if not more. Doesn't see that far fetched an idea since there are people who loudly protest their disdain for ntr, ntr reversal should be what they want
Posted on 22 November 2018, 02:47 by:   Lost_case    PM
Score +13
Part of: Rinkan Gakuen (輪姦学園)
https://e-hentai.org/s/28b779a043/818715-32

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