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Translated & Edited by fmko
Proofread by J99814

Enjoy :)

Three cheers for multiplayer mode!

Base +11, MegaGalvatron -6, duhuhuhu +4

Pretty good but some changes to consider:

Page 5 "Let's have a sex." -> "Let's have sex."'
Page 6 "her jerking off?" -> "her schlicking?" or "her masturbating?"
Page 7 "You can grab my boobs but you have to care about time and place." -> "You can grab my boobs but you have to take into consideration the time and place." or "have to take into account where we are." (suggestions)
Page 7 "Even if you always say that." -> "Even though you always say that."
Page 8 "I remember you've been saying you want these three player mode." -> "I remember you saying you wanted a three player mode."
Page 8 "While you're this wet, you shouldn't ask me 'Do you want to do it?', it's you who want to do it. -> "You shouldn't ask me if I'm the one who wants to do it if you're this wet. You're the one who wants to do it. or "Even though you're this wet, you're still asking me if I want to do it. You're the one who wants to do it."
Page 9 "You're sisters for sure." -> "You're definitely sisters."
Page 10 "It"s a clit-kiss <3" -> "It's a clit-kiss <3" (Used a quotation mark instead of an apostrophe)
Page 10 "Now, sisters are rubbing their clits on each other." -> "Oh, the sisters are rubbing their clits on each other." or "You sisters are rubbing your clits on each other now." (I can't read Japanese so I'm not sure about the original meaning of this sentence.)
Page 10 "Admiral ~ It fels so good ~" -> "Admiral ~ It feels so good ~"
Page 10 "If you stir my pussy like this." -> "If you stir up my pussy like this." (Personal preference)
Page 11 "I'm coming." -> "I'm cumming." (Same goes for the second bubble)
Page 12 "Both of you had a lot." (This sentence is really vague (Had a lot of what?))
Page 15 "Haruna-chan, you wanna do this?" -> "Haruna-chan, would you like to have a go?" or "Haruna-chan, would you like to try?"
Page 15 "Come into me, Admrial." -> "Come inside me, Admiral" or "Please enter me, Admiral" or "Insert yourself inside me, Admiral" (Personal preference, I just think the original line reads really awkwardly)
Page 17 "I guess I must..." -> "If I have to..." or "I suppose I should" (Personal preference)
Page 18 "A-Admiral I'm cuming again." -> "A-Admiral I'm cumming again."

@fmko No problem. Also, if you decide the keep the original lines, would you mind telling the reasons behind those after you update the gallery?

Base +6, Cheese Ninja +10, Silvie +13, wavedash +7, Tiru +3, MegaGalvatron -6, roelling +6, bagiaaa +9, shinatocool +7, psicomenace +7, XxRecyclexX +6, duhuhuhu +4

@Nozomori

Thanks for pointing out those

But I left some of them for some reasons. And pg12, their precum. You know, he fingered their vagina and they came. I might have chosen the word 'made' or 'enjoyed'.

Fixed and Reuploaded torrent. And I sent PM. It'd be better I think

Base +10, MegaGalvatron -6, bagiaaa +9, skylancer1 +4, psicomenace +7

Nice upload but I think I'll wait for the gallery to be updated with the grammar fixes.

Base +6