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(C67) [Majimeya (isao)] Wheat No. 1 (One Piece) [English] [D-W]

(C67) [真面目屋 (イサオ)] Wheat No.1 (ワンピース) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2007-10-27 08:56
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:12.24 MiB
Length:31 pages
Favorited:303 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.14

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Posted on 16 November 2010, 08:32 by:   OlanTheBard    PM
Score -50
Ratings (individual):

1st story:

Sexiness - 6/10 - It manages to have good sexual themes and some distinctive anatomy, but Nami is bland and her tits are meh. Plus her ass is bad.

Fidelity - 7/10 - A good doujin has to give the right vibe of the material it is using and Frank is spot on while the art is strikingly alike the original but Nami doesn't act her personality at all, instead being this shy girl she most certainly isn't.

Story - 3/10 - It manages to have a couple of nice exchanges and the dialog isn't terribly ridden with clich&eacute;s, with a nice and sudden conclusion, but the characters' traits aren't utilized and the situation isn't that interesting.

2nd story:

Sexiness - 7/10 - Sexy, sexy Devil Robin? Major sexiness points. Good facial? Massive sexiness points. Good sex talk? Massive sexiness points. Bland lack of creative sex and lack of anus? Bad and bland anatomy. Could've been great, but it stands as just good.

Fidelity - 9/10 - If you told me that Oda himself did this comic I'd not think twice before agreeing. Robin and Sanji are spot-on both in likeness to the original and personality. The only thing lacking is that Robin was a even more passive than usual, she'd comment a bit or at least do more.

Story - 6/10 - Great setup, great idea, but neglects to utilize Robin's traits to the fullest. Hana Hana no Mi can do amazing things and that is a lost chance...

3rd story:

Sexiness - 3/10 - Overall fails to be sexy and is very bland.

Fidelity - 6/10 - The style is at odds with the original but the characters act a bit like they are.

Story - 8/10 - Good setup, great utilization of the characters' traits and funny ending. Overall pretty good.
Posted on 25 June 2018, 14:04 by:   Red of EHCOVE    PM
Score +55
Posted on 13 August 2022, 16:44 by:   Floripes    PM
Score +41
https://www.suruga-ya.jp/product/detail/ZHOA6682
Posted on 08 February 2024, 21:55 by:   tedderböse    PM
Score +8
Nami 10/10. What a trash comment from OlanTheBard LMAO

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