My first translation ! Can you tell me if you like it ? ^^

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Yuki Onna getting some love, awwww yeah.
And translation seems ok. Not the greatest in the world, but it's your first, so it's pretty good.

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Pretty good, just keep on going.

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This artist really made the effort to emulate the original mangaka's style. It's very good. And the story is pretty cute. I always liked Tsurara.

Nice translation. I can't be bothered to check the raw for accuracy, but there are no obvious problems.

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The art is quite similiar to the series' art, pretty great.

And I didn't really notice any problems with the translation while reading it.

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I'd say for a first translation that both the grammar and editing are pretty decent but extra kudos most certainly goes to your choice of materials, making this a most excellent share.

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Thanks for translation! Tsurara needs more attention!

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considering comments at https://e-hentai.org/g/693338/3fe5990127/ can someone comment whether this is a rewrite?

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