ONE: Whoever is writing for this needs to learn English better. TWO: The incest tag doesn't belong. From what little I could read, I can tell the sex is between lovers from highschool, not relatives. Meaning, it's not incest.
You people should stop posting unfinished works, the artist dktorzi isnt english native, plus this is far from being finished and spell/grammar checked. Want to post his works, let him finish them first.