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Samus Experimentation

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Posted:2014-08-03 00:39
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Language:English  
File Size:4.16 MiB
Length:11 pages
Favorited:41 times
Rating:
67
Average: 1.93

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Posted on 03 August 2014, 00:39 by:   HunterOpera    PM
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I've been fiddling around with TechaRts 3d Custom Girl and this is the sort of thing that results.
Posted on 03 August 2014, 04:08 by:   Randomguy664    PM
Score +58
Reminds me a bit of Henshin-san's work. I'll give some constructive critique.

There's no resistance, there's no fear, there's no build-up to to the brain-washing. There isn't even any action.

She's already caught and hooked up, so there's no establishing Samus as her own character in this, rather than just a tool for the writer. If you want me to care, you got to set up the situtation better. Have her on a mission (or after one), hear a noise, brush it off. Woman comes in and there's some struggle, instill some fear into Samus. Let Samus have a nchance to fight back, call the other woman crazy, and then realize how powerless she is. Give Samus dialogue when she gets put into the machine, let her struggle, I want to hear her scream, plead. Give Samus dialogue that shows the brains leaking out her ears (Henshin-san was good at that).

This may have been simple, 'fiddling around', but it's still just her in this thing from different angles and different expression.
Posted on 03 August 2014, 12:25 by:   Renalo    PM
Score +13
That isn't Samus, It's Crimrose from the game "Cosmic Break"
Posted on 03 August 2014, 13:59 by:   Nightarix    PM
Score +26
... question was this commissioned work? if yes then you can ignore the rest of my opinionated comment.

If it's not a commission then, in my opinion as a viewer, i would suggest not using a characters name without a model that at least looks close to said character. ignoring the fact that this weak-willed girl your script portrays her to be is the complete opposite of the character, claiming someone who only has the blonde hair(wrong shade of blonde if i recall right though), will probably make others believe your picking the name for either the fan base or a personal fantasy. either way as you can see the ratings are rather horrible for this work so far.

edit: oh and the reason my short rant(not sure it's long enough to even call it that...) is about using a model that at least resembles the characters look is because i assume that people will for the most part ignore the personality difference, given that it IS porn.(even soft-core hypnosis like this) btw please don't reply "but i can't find a model for the character i want". I know this will sound like a dick coming from someone who has NO experience in this field(model making) but if you can't find/get one MAKE IT, or commission it.
Posted on 03 August 2014, 16:36 by:   Ziss    PM
Score +4
It look's more like A.L.E. LazFlamme with just Crimrose gen1 armor. I agree with Nightrix about this.
Posted on 03 August 2014, 21:18 by:   Megaman-Omega    PM
Score +6
It's not bad at all but while I know from experience getting the face and minor changes to the body done is difficult but when you have a character tied or otherwise bound in such a way that she really can't move you'd need to rely on more varied features to better convey what's going on. As is image's 3&5 and 2&4 are virtually alike, there would be a world of difference if you changed it up by having Samus struggling and angry at some point and having her clearly worried and fearful in another.

Also you may want to put a little more effort into making her look more like Samus. I understand there are no mods at all to make her look the part exactly (not even a zero suit mod. What the hell) but searching out the right hair to make it look more like Samus's ponytail and some parts to a blue skintight suit would go a long way (It doesn't even have to be the Zero Suit in this case. In here just some blue arm and leg pieces would at least give the illusion of the suit)

http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=manga&illust_id=44583074 Something like that's a good example. It may not exactly be the Zero Suit but it can give enough of an impression to pass in this scenario.

But aside from those minor complaints this is very good for a first attempt. I've personally wanted to make my own CG set with this but I just haven't had the patience to make more than a single image in a planned "set"
Posted on 17 September 2014, 02:04 by:   IncurableFetish    PM
Score +6
I liked it. It's simple and straightforward but there's nothing wrong with that. Sometimes that's just the thing. I liked the line about her soul being scraped away. :3

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