Ear piece - nothing special
Nipple pierce - normal
Clit pierce - also normal
Navel pierce - still nothing abnormal
3 labia pierces - not sure if want

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Aya Shachou's always been amazingly extreme so it's not the piercings that irk me, it's the anorexia. As much as I love Aya's art, stuff like page 25 where you can practically see her pelvis bone sticking out isn't my thing. I'm just another guy who's here for the hentai though so who cares in the end, overall good stuff.

Last edited on 29 August 2014, 11:12.

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Beautiful.

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she looks anorexic.

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I really love all the piercing stuff, but man, it's like he's fucking a skeleton.

Oh well, art is still good. I can dig it.

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She looks like she needs a good burger.

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Holocaust victim...

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I'm curious to see what the story is, here. Is her creepy RAITA-esque physique just some kind of stylistic choice, or is it actually something addressed in the doujin? I hope the afterword gets translated, too, in case he brings it up in there but not in the dialogue.

If you can look past it, though, she's pretty darned cute. Aya Shachou's been doing good things with the shipgirls (the Mikuma doujin especially), so I hope he keeps it up.

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@MercuryLamp
About the anorexia, it's just his way to portray Z1
In the afterword he talk about the use of body piercing, which often only appears at the end of story ( as result of mindbreak/corruption) and often used in NTR themed doujin. He wonders if he wraps the story completely.

Personally I think he did a good job.

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Damn, Z1 is really great here!

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Which one of you brain dead faggots voted down female:anorexic? Her skeletal structure is clearly visible.

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