Translator: Tengu, Editor: GC Midnight
edit: typo on page 6 fixed.

Thanks for saving this from Laruffii's horrible rewrite.

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Thank you kindly for giving us a REAL Translation and making Laruffi look like the skid mark on the underpants of the site that he is.

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Thanks for the translation! Shame about the censorship, though...

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I think mentioning Tuxedo Mask by name pretty confirms him as an actual fan. All SM fans don't have to be overweight and bespectacled... though I can understand why you'd think so.

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I'm mildly interested in the zombie series Isao mentions in the afterword, but there are no scanlations. :(

also, the other series he mentions by the same author isn't a hentai, it's a 4koma.

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Not to nitpick but wouldn't "your so rough, mister" actually be "You're so rough, mister"? Or maybe "You are so rough, Mister" It is on page 6 and it just didn't sound right to me.

@Asuna hime. everyone whines about Laruffie so why can't I complain about Doujin-moe making a mistake? Plus if you didn't notice, this is not Doujin-moe so I didn't know they changed it on their site.

Last edited on 31 August 2014, 20:59.

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@goatboy, they already fixed that typo on their site:
http://www.doujin-moe.us/tzux2ux9

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saved from the clutches of language:laruffi

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Isao Sailor Senshi art is so damn good, he's ruined other Sailor Moon doujins for me.

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My hopes really soared when I saw the teenage chibi Usa on the second page. But sadly she was a know show... I hate it when Doujinkas do that... :(

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I'll get up ????? Thank you.

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@ Hezard: thought you want ugly fatass like you described in https://e-hentai.org/g/760516/eb2f9defd3/ and insert to in (https://e-hentai.org/g/590600/cc61422b58/, https://e-hentai.org/g/761657/03417649fc

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