This is an amateur translation
I'm not English nor Japanese speaker.
If you have any suggest,comment
I'll gracefully accept it.
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according to elgringo it really seem like I missing the first page, my deeply apologize.

I'd recommend getting someone to proofread your translation before you actually start it. Your English isn't as bad as some amateur translations, but there were quite a few errors in your grammar. Mostly confusing I, me, and my.

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Basically the same as mysteriousstranger3, your English is good enough to understand whats going on and I had no problem reading it, but getting someone to check your translation and fix things up is definitely a good idea.

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First panel on page two- "Yeah, I think I can live with this situation".

Also, is anyone else disturbed by the lack of moles on page 14 after they used it as a plot point?

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'So gucci' wait wh- '[2ez4rty(Z?)]

LOL

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* This is a work of fiction

Holy shit and here I was thinking that somewhere in the world a man got turned into a futon

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clearly EG fan there. gucci + rtz = homo hahhahaha

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Amateur but still much better than Laruffii
Thx for the hard work

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That english makes as much sense as any ntr story.

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So Gucci! So very, very Gucci!

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Reading this is making me more frustrated than what's actually reasonable.

Translation for the author: Read this make me mad. Not gucci.

Last edited on 12 October 2014, 22:32.

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ヽ(◉◡◔)ﾉ I am a RTZ fan boy I have downsyndrome ヽ(◉◡◔)ﾉ

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dude i don't fucking pay tuition to use my school's internet to read TWITCH MEMES on e-hentai

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...h-has Otapun finally returned?!?

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so gucchi~

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Agreed; it's clearly not a flawless translation, but still, having someone who doesn't know the language well is MUCH better than not having a translation at all. Thanks.

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@Vertex_force and mysteriousstranger3
I appreciate your suggestion, grammar is the most thing I worry about, I also thought of that
but honestly I have no one to ask for.
ps. I edited the last page that I confused for the title but somehow it make a new gallery @_@.
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@opk
thank you for your offer, but currently I didn't have a plan to try translate another yet.

Last edited on 13 October 2014, 18:28.

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This looks like a good early recipient for the "poor grammar" tag when it's implemented.

Edit: All right, here goes. This is not a comprehensive list of mistakes, just enough to justify the tag.

1. Page 1, Panel 1: "after I graduated from college I getting a part-time job..." -> "After I graduated from college I got a part-time job..."
2. Page 1, Panel 3: "well there is nothing in particularly I want." -> "There is nothing that I want in particular."
3. Page 1, Panel 5: "but it not that I dissatisfy with my life or anything." -> "But it's not that I'm dissatisfied with my life or anything."
4. Page 1, Panel 5: "college girl now a day is incredible~" -> "College girls nowadays are incredible~"
5. Page 1, Panel 8: "and then one day when I wake up..." -> "And then one day when I woke up..."
6. Page 2, Panel 1: "The nightmare that actually feel good...?" -> "The nightmare that actually feels good...?"
7. Page 2, Panel 2: "Why I got turned into a futon!?" -> "Why did I get turned into a futon!?" or "Why was I turned into a futon!?"
8. Page 3, Panel 2: "She is college girl who live next room to me isn't it!?" -> "She is the college girl who lives next door, isn't she!?"
9. Page 4, Panel 1: "oh boy, she didn't has any hair down here!! it look so smooth!! damt it." -> "Oh boy, she doesn't have any hair down here!! It looks so smooth!! Damn it."
10. Page 5, Panel 6: "oh, she start changing." -> "Oh, she started to change."
11. Page 7, Panel 1: "How will everyone response today~?" -> "How will everyone respond today~?" or "How will today's response be~?"

Last edited on 16 October 2014, 14:42.

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Lol at the censorship trying to make sense, i mean, how would be a penis of a sheet?

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Still better than laruffi.

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If you're looking for people to proofread, try the forums. there's a whole group of message boards there for translating.

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@blueby

Thanks for the release. Still rough but better than anything by goatse. I can actually see the effort.

If you want PM me I can help you out a bit

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@blueby

I'd be happy to help proof read for you. I can't promise I'll always be free though, nor am I some English major.

And if you could attempt this; https://e-hentai.org/g/404433/d15eda3c6b/
I've been waiting ever since it came out for a translation. ;_;

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Tag Language:Rewrite, Language:Poor Grammar

Edit: Correct tagspace

Edit Edit: SO GUCCHI

Last edited on 24 February 2015, 09:54.

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Raw: https://e-hentai.org/s/a1adb3fadf/734481-203

On top of all the bad english, first page is missing ._.

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Surely there's a good tag for this kind of plot?

Not quite gloryhole. Kind of, vaguely "male:stuck in wall" maybe

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I know your feel, bro. At least, your readers' reaction is better than mine for the first translation. lol

Keep translating. It will help improving your skill, I recommend.

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Aw, too bad the guy didn't get anywhere with her in the end. Would've been cool if something happened outside of him being a futon.

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@Drops of Honey
If you don't want to read it then don't. No one is forcing you to. Likewise, don't try to force people to downvote this just because YOU don't like it. That's fucking bullshit.

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