With this kind of low rating it probably should stop going.

Base +10, xxard +8, Btech Thor +16, somerandomdude33 +6, shichiseiken +5, Pätemätön +6

It's rough and a bit too past faced, but the art style is actually pretty good for a sketch. This isn't bad at all imo ~

Base +7, somerandomdude33 -6

Please don't be discouraged, you've simply posted your work too soon. This is a common error in the age of internet and self-publication. Draw about a thousand comic pages (I'm not exaggerating, literally a thousand) and then come back and show us how your drawing skills have improved.

Base +5, somerandomdude33 -6

Dude, like Etic said. but It's fine and all.
Buuuuuuuuut.... draw more.
Your skill is almost non existant.
I can feel confident that RIGHT NOW. I can post something worth.

Base +7, somerandomdude33 -6

@Etic

Posting stuff way too soon is the way to go, if a few people enjoy it then it's fine. The internet is going to troll you regardless, might as well put your practice time to use in getting your name out there, even if it's only with a few people. Then fans who enjoy later stuff can always go back and look at the really early stuff if they want to, there's literally nothing to lose.

Base +7, somerandomdude33 -6

A modern Tim Buckley right here.

Base +7

I'm looking past the fact that it's a sketch and early work and looking at your potential. I like the art and you're dialogue is fun, :D. After you've done sketches like this for a while I think you'll really start to shine. I'd say first things first though, when you're ready to step it up, the lined Paper is the first thing to go(I think that's the biggest thing drawing negative criticism).

but yeah, as Zetsub said "The Internet" will troll you regardless. And many of our favorite western artists did start by showing sketches or very pre-mature work(especially 3d comic artist like Infinity Sign, man how far he's come :D).

Base +6

Very rough but shows potential.
Might I suggest going the "show, not tell" route with these, by which I mean show elements of the transformations in detail rather than just going "bewbs" off to the side

Unless this is just a very rough preliminary

Base +6

You have real talent, please post more. As you surmised, your high caliber of work would have been unnoticed if you had only signed up on D/A. E-hentai is where all middle school prodigies belong, and I will look forward to seeing your weekly binder sheet updates in my searches.

Last edited on 20 November 2014, 09:34.

Base +8

Wow, look at all them haters. Your art is pretty good. I think it is easy to say you're a beginner just because it is drawn on lined paper, that there is little post-processing done after it is scanned. But I am glad I've seen this. To sensualaoi's point, I would have never known of your existence if you posted on DA.

And as Zetsub said (and he knows first hand!), the world will troll you, but create your art for your true audience, the ones who are looking forward to more, and that includes me.

Base +6

The art's not bad but doing it electronically would be wise, a drawing table and photoshop would be a great place to start I would also recommend story boarding and making barriers between the sections.
Also Deviantart would be a good place for your type of art to thrive.

Base +2, The_Inventor838 +5, blagblag +7, Pätemätön +6, AriTheGoodstravagant +1

Really nice! Keep at it, there's a lot of potential

Base +3, AriTheGoodstravagant +1