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Dunno if this qualifies for the poor grammar tag, but english is definitely not his first language. Almost every sentence is either just badly worded, or missing words/punctuation. Story seems kind of interesting though.

Last edited on 30 November 2014, 03:25.

Base +14, Mewuka +6, Couchcaboose +6, raptor54321 +7, blagblag +7, Ridley-4 +3

From the story, I would half say that it was written like that from the get go. I would totally accept it as Borat-esque in the original.

It probably wasn't, but at the same time, the flaws here add to the character.

Base +7, VaryEx +7

"hello everyone! I am in the hell" For some reason that line just made me lose it. All in all the translation isn't perfect but hey its probably far better than anything I can ever do.

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I get the feeling that this would not be as good in proper english

Base +3, ohnoitsmangofett +4, Murderbot +10, Killer542 +6

The...English in this one just makes it more hilarious really.

It's like a cliffnote version of a hentai story.

>Fuck a girl who appears in my room, become her groom.
>Fuck the mother-in-law, get founded, 3p
>IT'S A TRAP
>Fuck maids too

Base +6, ohnoitsmangofett +4

I read the whole thing in dolans voice and now i have no ribs.

Base +6, hackgum +6

I read it as spodermun's voice.

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Well when in hell do as the hellions do I supose

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The Grammar! It Burns!

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