@rms141
This is indeed the correct page order.

Either the pages are out of order or the writing makes zero sense.

Base +7, ana556 +7, Paizurikin +8, Timelink +6, Kenyenzie +6, Riyu1940 +7

I think the writer is a non-native English speaker, in that case it pretty much comes with the territory. At least the girl is hot.

Base +6, Paizurikin +8, Zaesha +8, Kenyenzie +6, kingkong77 +4

He's good at drawing curvy women, but the male characters are pathetic and the story is not there.

Base +6, Timelink +6, zzl4100598 +19, Kenyenzie +6

Going back to note as the user claiming to be The Jay Marvello stated on a different Jay Marvello post; the majority of the work that pops up here? Is commissioned and progresses according to the whimsy and cash flow of the commissioner, hence any confusion or lacking in plot.

-Also like 2 years later on the explanation that's actually not that convoluted- First guy is the guy from part 3, who's basically her side guy, Mikey is her boyfriend and dresses up like a vampire here; he's also been mad because "somebody" (probably Alex) said something about seeing her and first guy (don't recall his name) leaving a dance together. Alex (the not-quite-Wolverine expy) gets approached at the party in this one and is awkward as hell (combination of forementioned Kelsie not-liking him and her suddenly flirting). He grows a pair when she's about to leave and they have fun in the bathroom between 5 and 6. Mikey is oblivious.

Last edited on 26 January 2017, 01:54.

Base +5, Kenyenzie +6, Anomynoos +6, HumanHater +6

The artwork is pretty good at least.

Base +1, kingkong77 +4

God damn it, when are we going to SEE Kelsie get fucked?

Base +1