(C87) [Full Accele (Akiya Akira)] KILLAGAIN (Kill la Kill) [English] {doujin-moe.us}

Wow, there are a lot of problems with this doujin. First the writing and translation. I'm not sure which screwed up harder but the grammar flicks from awful to plain laughable and when that's not the case the plot points in the writing alone are awful in the beginning ryuko is wearing a school uniform similar to senketsu which feels like she's being put back at the beginning of her character arc and the whole moral of the show, learning to let go of whats lost. "we're not... really familiar with senketsu. but we don't mind you staining these clothes." Alright if your not familiar with senketsu then why would you have 2 black sailor uniforms in the first place? And the fact that it takes a half hour tops to break the will and minds of these characters almost feels downright insulting.
Finally, crushingly is the art style. Simply put it does not suit a kill la kill hentai. It feels more like something that should be used in a more grounded show, or at the very least a far more dark parody. I'm not saying it's bad it just does not fit, if it had been using an art style that fit I probobly wouldn't have even noticed the poor writing or written this long ass critique.
As it stands it's pretty terrible but even then it's one of the only kill la kill doujinshis that were translated to English so it's still something at least.

Posted on 07 February 2020, 19:59 by: TheGoodGiggle

Someone else explained the poor grammar tag. It just wasn't present so I'm tagging it.

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language:	english translated
parody:	kill la kill
character:	ryuuko matoi satsuki kiryuuin
group:	full accele
artist:	akiya akira
male:	hairy harem muscle sweating
female:	ahegao anal big breasts blowjob bukkake double penetration hairy mind break rape schoolgirl uniform sweating thick eyebrows
mixed:	group mmf threesome