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Commissioned by a generous Anonymous

OHHHH FINALLY! A Lyfa doujin without the usual NTR shit!

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I just looked at the jp ver today again and wished it was in eng 1 hr later it was. I think i'm magic! No but seriously great work and thanks for the upload!

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Nice! Thanks for the Upload

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Who put the 'cheating' tag here? It's outright said that this is a clone of Lyfa.

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Now that's just sad.
Not even enough balls to go after the real deal, yet he's happy with an easily controllable clone.
This is yet another reason I hate Sword Art Online doujins.

@Drops of Honey: And here I thought the whole point of fantasy is to "not be reminded of reality."

Last edited on 12 March 2015, 17:20.

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@Hectotane: When the alternative is to break into her house and actually rape her body while she's in AO? All things considered, I think this is the less harmful option to all involved.

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@Hectotane, is this seriously a reason to hate on SAO doujins? I mean sure I hate them too, but usually because it features Kirito with a harem to piss me off because each girl is good in their own way and he did nothing to really earn their affection.

I actually liked this because of how "realistic" to the plot of the anime it could possibly get. I mean it's obvious that "Leafa" isn't interested in him. Much less to expect the guy to just "have balls" to go after the girl who treats him like shit pretty much all the time, its out of character.

In a way he's not much different than people who use this site to get off on fantasy rather than going for the real thing, because not everything in life works quite like your fantasies do.

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I'm saving myself for virtual sex. It will be worth it.

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Well that was definitely a lot more realistically developed than most Doujinshi which I definitely appreciated a lot.

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would be nice if it were true instead of Kirito fucking harem that does not care about any girls having just taking advantage for you when making necessary if the anime was this way would be more interesting, at least for me.
this guy gave his life for Kirito's pussy in SAO first phase, Leafa should have at least consideration by her so it is treated as nothing by own Kirito.

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Yeah, no ntr and no Kirito. What's the difference?

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