Chapter 3

It is more like engrish. They misspelled semen as seaman.

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This seams fool-ish.

"cock saws"... seriously?

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is this the new laruffi

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...I would suggest the translator brush up on their english, as well as lurk around a few scanlation forums, before attempting another work.

In addition to the poor grasp of english, easy to notice subtleties of japanese - easy to the point that even I know what they are - are missed as well. Example: repeatedly spelling out small "-tsu"s, instead of recognizing their function.

I do not like being harsh to a translator cutting their teeth, and I am sorry for that. But this work is simply not at a level that it should have been released, even with a proofreader giving it a pass-over.

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"I don't waunt to."

I let it go the first time this typo appeared. Now, I think the translator is screwing with us intentionally.

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president... tomato...san? why are they bringing fruit into this mess of a translation...

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I lol'd hard at this translation. Fucking hilarious! Nevertheless, he/she tried. Thanks anyways.

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Does anyone know what COMIC and issue this is from?

Edit: Ah thanks a lot Kuraiz. Can't believe I missed that from the title (thought Mazocian was just part of the series name).

Last edited on 19 March 2015, 03:49.

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watch out laruffi you got competition now

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"*Desu cute way some girl talk like. Like Kana from Otobokua."

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@crazymagic
Heres the raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/386111/45e730c181/

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Quality control goes a long way when it comes to translations... Apparently that wasn't the case here.

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The birth of a new CGRascal.

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I've got a nosebleed not because of the h-scenes but bcoz of the translation...

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@Silverkerr To be fair, CG has gotten better. Still not perfect, but certainly not THIS bad.

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missing page 2 = https://e-hentai.org/s/f182e4fa50/386111-41

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@ mav9882
Are we to assume from your poor grammar and spelling mistakes that English is NOT your native language? If so, try and get someone, for whom English is their native tongue, to proofread your translations before posting anymore.

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