Other than the one in page 12, i am in no way responsible of the (probably) misuse of german in this book

that said, if you see anything else wrong, just type it down here. i'm open to criticism and such

Edit: credit where credit is due: /g/778920/d3ba4fae15/
Edit2: @bigp0wer errors fixed, thanks mate

Last edited on 22 March 2015, 04:11.

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Awesome Thanks for this ^_^

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Stroheim face

GERMAN SHIPGIRLS ARE BEST IN THE KANTAI

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Bismark, best girl.

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This title... just AWESOME

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Perfectly servicable German.

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Germans best ships

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Checking for punctuation and grammatical errors:

p. 8 : " 'Cmon" --> "C'mon" - misplaced apostrophe
p. 10: "...There'still so much <3" --> "...There's still so much <3"
p. 15: "Well, since you begging me like that..." --> "Well, since 'you're' begging me like that..."

Hope these helped. Either way, good job for the translation.

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Germans win

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