Original post: https://e-hentai.org/g/772919/7dca169aaf/.

As with my previous translation, I didn't try to be perfectly literal, translating Japanese is obviously very difficult for someone who doesn't speak it. I used the best tools at my disposal and did my best to maintain what I thought was the spirit of the comic. Enjoy!

i liked the translation, good work

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Good work.

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Am I the only person that finds it slightly odd they have a dildo pole? Is the guy that makes spears and tools just really perverted or something?

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Fine translation. The problem is the work itself is just pretty bland. Not much variety, in my opinion. You have a single dildo with 2 or 3 frames, and a bunch of copy+pasted handjobs. Normally this would be fine with just more text.

@Markus2 that's what these image sets are always of. The main draw is the text, which is why this is lackluster.

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@Randomguy664
I think that might have been a reference to the spear of Longinus.
Although in that case it should've been Byakuren on that cross.

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Good job, great translation, hopefully you can translate other works by this artist

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