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[Hoshino Ryuuichi] Saimin Choukyou Gakuen Ch. 1-2 [English]

[星野竜一] 催眠調教学園 第1-2話 [英訳]

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Posted:2015-06-19 05:19
Parent:825655
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Language:English  TR
File Size:27.16 MiB
Length:36 pages
Favorited:1149 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.51

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Posted on 19 June 2015, 07:07 by:   rext11    PM
Score +178
This might actually be one of the few, if not only, hentai stories I've seen where the MC, working at a school, solely went after the female faculty and not the students.
Last edited on 22 June 2015, 06:35.
Posted on 19 June 2015, 09:53 by:   ulgaming    PM
Score +30
Chapter 1 was epic! Waiting for more! :D

Edit: Lmfao. Chapter 2's ending was hilarious.
Last edited on 21 June 2015, 10:07.
Posted on 19 June 2015, 10:29 by:   joker901    PM
Score +67
What a nice guy, he's willing to help everyone. Everyone that's not a guy that is.
Posted on 19 June 2015, 12:36 by:   rheinz    PM
Score +21
Great doujin, please translate it more!
Posted on 19 June 2015, 15:31 by:   Darktaka    PM
Score +6
Awesome was hoping someone would pick this up.
Posted on 19 June 2015, 21:26 by:   biribiri10    PM
Score +200
I appreciate the translation, but I think it would be better if there were fewer errors in the English text.

p1: "I have improve on this ability" => tense mix
p1: "I choose a career suited for this" => tense mix
p3: "It's like your psychic" => you're
p4: "This the perfect job" => missing "is"
p6: "It seems she's concern of something sexual" => "It seems that her concern is of something sexual" or "It seems that she's concerned about something sexual"
p6: "male students and teacher" => "male students and teachers"
p7: "the student's rumour were true" => somewhat awkward; if a single student, "the student's rumour was true", multiple students for one or more rumours, but a better take: "the rumours were true"
p7: "my anxiety are starting to affect" => "my anxiety is" or "my anxieties are"
p8: "I was lucky to have enter" => "have entered" or just "enter"
p12: "your most embossing part" => "embarrassing"

I'll stop there, but I do want to mention that the text is very dry and stilted in general.
Posted on 19 June 2015, 22:22 by:   Innocenteyes    PM
Score +11
omg yes been waiting for this to be translated! 8 moroe chapters to go! also there's that other series by the same artist that also has a bit of mind control as well.
Posted on 20 June 2015, 23:09 by:   jellbell    PM
Score +42
No guarantee I have this right but I will try to go over a few from page 13 onwards

13 "its because you wear clothes that emphasized your chest"
Mixture of past and present tense? Past tense "wore clothes that emphasized" or present tense "wear clothes that emphasize"
I would say use the present tense

14 "it`s ... feels gross"
It feels gross

15 "The truth is you love to be stare at"
love to be stared at
Posted on 21 June 2015, 09:56 by:   tristanupshaw    PM
Score -27
[bold] I [/bold]
Posted on 21 June 2015, 16:59 by:   Buffalo01    PM
Score +14
Meh there are mistakes here and there but I'm just happy to see someone translate this. I mean there are other translators that have been at this for years and are still pretty awful so this is a good effort from someone new at this
Posted on 22 June 2015, 11:59 by:   jellbell    PM
Score +49
Same thing as before, complete amateur trying to help.

22 "She worked at one of the most successful trading company"
Needs to be plural. "trading companies"

22 "im obsessed trying to figure out what to do"
"im obsessed with"

23 "she feels lonely and depression"
"she feels lonely and depressed"

23 "This time i`ll be a more forceful"
"this time i`ll be more forceful"

24 "The mental state of someone whose help been rejected multiply time can become dangerous unstable!"
"the mental state of someone whose help has been rejected multiple times can become dangerously unstable!"

25 "she seem to calm down a bit"
"she seems to have calmed down a bit"

27 "If I encourage a bit more"
"if I encourage her a bit more"

33 "Does my cock feels good?"
"Does my cock feel good?"

33 "Amemiya sensei cock"
"Amemiya Sensei's cock"

36 "I should had punished you"
"I should have punished you"

The "such a thing" line on page 26 and 27 seems awkward but I am not qualified to understand what the intended meaning is here. Sorry if I am just being dense and missing something obvious.
Posted on 28 June 2015, 01:17 by:   blunt005    PM
Score +6
For some reason, the fact that the I's in this are bigger than the rest of the text really bohers me.
Posted on 18 February 2016, 14:30 by:   restlez    PM
Score +17
No more updates? Thanks for the effort anyway
Posted on 15 June 2016, 04:45 by:   Whatdo    PM
Score +17
That last page, though.
Posted on 25 November 2017, 22:20 by:   RustySword7    PM
Score +6
Great Teacher Amemiya
Posted on 24 June 2020, 17:32 by:   deadlymopo    PM
Score +6
Saimin another CH 3-10

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