Translator: Noraneko
Editor: jbk

I guess this means deodorant is out of the question.

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They clearly will use their own handmade deodorant.

Base +5, Evyy +6

Page 13: "I'm itching here!"

Itching where? I can't see anything!

Base +6, csavarhuzo +5, Evyy +6, Megaton +11, MechWarriorNY +7, Porokichin66 +6, Shevanel +7, Hollow_Gaea +7, NU0VA +6

Meanwhile, the neighbours: "*sniff* Whats this stench?" "Beats me, the sanitation truck?"

Base +9, Romi the Byzantine +6, Evyy +6, MechWarriorNY +7, Pillowgirl +21, Ooe Kintarou +2, Hollow_Gaea +7, BlueSmoke +6, darienkd -9

I don't think this poor artist understands the concept of perspective very well. Check page 4 and 5: the most enormous lower body and vagina I have ever seen, and a point-of-view that makes no sense on the last panel.

More just an observation than anything - the doujin was not bad and was fairly enjoyable. :)

Base +6, Zantos -7, msrat +7, Navi_94 -4, Kacywang -6

Pheromones are scary

Base +6, Evyy +6, MechWarriorNY +7, Ooe Kintarou +2, Hollow_Gaea +7

what ? you're sorry for being a pervert ? no , no , no , keep being lewd and pervert , I will definitely enjoy my entire life !

Base +1, darienkd -9

need reseed pls ty

Base +6, darienkd -9