Tons of wasted potential. 1.5 star

Base +6, Btech Thor +16, grisznak +8, zykyne +7, grif1RAYO -6, noowz64 +4, SpencerPootis +6, wispylurker -9, borkenbea -8, Raduuh +9, lost-in-thought +6, bigblackD -13, Spume Lord +10

Yeah it could have been better. I mean, who is their boss? I understand the transformation part, but still...

Base +9, Btech Thor +16, zykyne +7, wispylurker -9, melekain +7, Raduuh +9, Stormblaze69 +2

Badly in need of context for what the fuck is going on.

Nice art, though, and neat transformation.

Last edited on 01 September 2015, 09:23.

Base +6, hank_ +5, zykyne +7, noowz64 -4, wispylurker -9, melekain +7, borkenbea +8, kilerog +6, SpencerPootis +6, Raduuh +9, Stormblaze69 +2

Excellent......

Base +5, Renalo -8, kilkov87 +6, noowz64 -4, madnessspawn -6, NotAGodComplex +7, wispylurker +9, Raduuh +9, bigblackD +13

more please!

Base +6, Renalo -8, kilkov87 +6, noowz64 -4, madnessspawn -6, NotAGodComplex +7, wispylurker +9, Raduuh +9, katsuowota -6

That last pic is so not my fetish. still nice art and plot.

Base +4, noowz64 -4, madnessspawn -6, NotAGodComplex +7, DeltaX +8, Raduuh +9, lost-in-thought +6

I think that what's going on here is that both that man and those two monster girls sell exotic pets and he stole their customer. That's the conclusion I came to after seeing the last page and checking the first page again. It would explain the words ostrich noises on the first page.

Base +7, NotAGodComplex +7, wispylurker +9, Raduuh +9

disappointing

Base +7, wispylurker -9, Raduuh -9, lost-in-thought +6, bigblackD -13

i don't get it

Base +4, whitevalkyrie +6, lost-in-thought +6

Da source: http://jamsnjellies.deviantart.com/gallery/

Base +6, wispylurker +9, DitzyBunny +3, bigblackD +13

Realy strange ... 0_o

Base +3, Faerone -4