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Roleplaying [English] [Rewrite] [Picturefan]

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Posted:2015-09-02 00:32
Parent:None
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Language:English  RW
File Size:23.16 MiB
Length:19 pages
Favorited:202 times
Rating:
218
Average: 2.34

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Posted on 02 September 2015, 00:32 by:   Nobodycaresaboutme    PM
Uploader Comment
Hi, NobodyCaresAboutMe (aka Picturefan) here.
I don't speak japanese, chinese or any other asian language, so I picked a story that wasn't translated yet and pulled a translation out of my ass.

I have no idea what the story really is about myself, but I hope it is enjoyable this way.

My little gift to e-hentai for always lurking here.

I totally stole the scanlation from a gallery called: [Hiryuu Ran] Mitsu no Tsuki Ch. 3 (COMIC SIGMA 2013-05 Vol. 73) [Chinese] [空気系☆漢化]

Edit: Turns out it was translated into English after all - now I feel stupid.
Posted on 02 September 2015, 03:25 by:   EG83    PM
Score -2
I laugh a lot, but that's too hilarious to be porn XD
Posted on 02 September 2015, 03:56 by:   rimo89lo    PM
Score -43
thats pure gold please make moooore, laughing so hard right now
Posted on 02 September 2015, 04:23 by:   Hexxuus    PM
Score +91
The introduction into the main character's world was a masterful piece of intunity on it's own, as you experience first hand the daily lifes of the persona's themselves. The plot was not only intriguing and well formulated but also very convincing from the start and though the author aplied the 3 arch structuters to display most of the development that takes place, you never get the idea of being forced to into the neo liberal writer style as Riedner intended. Creative yet subtle insights into the characters true inners desires like "Onii-chan" rounds up any dogmatisms typically associated with the social standing of the family the reader might suspected from the start, keeping you on edge and suprising you on every page you turn over. The writers clearly knew what they were doing when they combined the two genres of Sci/fi and Romance providing a delicate balance of story, yes never over extending into the "unbelieveable" or "far fetched"This story not only inspires readers to make the most out of their daily lives, but also provides educational values to be taught towards the audience, describing in great detail how to calibrate a rod during harsh circumstances and conditions. Which may very well one day save your life as it still very relevant to today's world, something the author no doubt predicted that this would happen and he carefully threaded his advice into the nuances in the story's pay off.

I feel very inclined to leave a positive review, this story would have warranted a perfect 10 out 10 score. Unfortunately the Author misplaced the word "Lolicon", and in today's very volatile and stigmatized society which could have ofended several viewers. Due to the lack of a proper warning on the front page or tags tied to the story, readers are unable to avoid the content if they have religious or ethical issues with this. A small neglect towards the audience which forced me subtract 0,5 points, giving it a total of 9,5 out 10

9,5/10 "Would read" */b
Posted on 02 September 2015, 06:14 by:   Crush85    PM
Score +154
But there is a translation for it....
https://e-hentai.org/g/695074/845206881c/
Posted on 02 September 2015, 07:32 by:   JackMorrison    PM
Score +48
A Rewrite in 2015, is simply unacceptable. Maybe before 2010 it was.
Posted on 02 September 2015, 09:34 by:   Theravada    PM
Score +23
People are such babies. This is still pretty funny and an ok read. I'm glad it exists.
Posted on 02 September 2015, 13:44 by:   loli    PM
Score +16
Ok now....WTF.
Just WTF!!

Just WTF of this Shit!?!??
Posted on 02 September 2015, 15:12 by:   EcksyDee    PM
Score +73
There need to be more rewrites that turn cheating/ntr into stuff that's actually good
Posted on 03 September 2015, 04:53 by:   zztopjjjjjjj    PM
Score +54
I liked it for how meta it was. Mabye if we had a "joke" tag it would go over better.
Posted on 08 September 2015, 09:01 by:   Love1sWar    PM
Score +5
as a person who has comcast as a service, this hit me deep, 10/10
Posted on 27 November 2015, 21:52 by:   baobrain    PM
Score +63
Man people who want their porn fix are so grumpy, this was fucking hilarious, 11/10 would read again.
Posted on 07 March 2017, 21:26 by:   Hemidactylus    PM
Score +13
I don't see how the translator is obliged to apologize to chinks over stealing from them stolen intellectual property when these fuckers have repeatedly stolen freaking stealth fighter blueprints from white people.
Posted on 14 September 2018, 03:10 by:   father1    PM
Score +10
while I understand the original being Netorare how is this Netorare when the guy fucking her is supposed to be her husband vs the original who is fucking his mother in law?

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