An improved and more tedious editing. Dialogues corrected, clean pages, better handwriting.
And I, I'm still using the google translator.
Thanks to "Telm" by translating and work.
I could not preserve the old gallery, because they are over a year old, and not let me change them.
However, all comments were kept (the obscenities too)
Link http://www.mediafire.com/download/zaup6fbqcbcj612/The+demon+of+gensokyo.+Chapter+05+target+locked.+For+Tuteheavy+%28English+translation%29+REMAKE.rar