Yeah! Thanks a lot, man!

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page 5 'I'll just go over and warm them' I assume it should be warn, unless she plans on joining in with them.

Also, this is not something you can do anything about but the art is a bit inconsistent, he uncovers her right breast on page 7 but in the top frame of page 9 it is covered, then uncovered at the bottom of 9 then covered again on pages 10 and 11, this can be seen because her collar is much closer together than on page 7 when it was opened, showing that it is likely fastened up again.

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at first i thought this was gonna be sum ntr bullshit but it turned out to be really sweet. man i love kisaragi gunma. his artwork is average but the stories are always so good.

Base +1, crazymagic -11, herbi -6, Playstatixn -6, M0J0E -6

"Kisaragi Gunma's art is average." I never thought I would see that line. True there might be issues with consistency, but the clean crisp drawings and beautiful girls, make him way above average. I consider him to be one of the best. Tis' but my humble opinion, and, in no way, do I mean to demean anyone's opinion.

Base +11, Playstatixn +6, IM_Mortal -7, TCJJ +6

kisaragi gunma's sketches are so beautiful that any attempt to color it would only lower the quality
even his/her own coloring is the same

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female:big breasts big ass

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