Translated by Fated Circle
Comisioned by Garass

Cute female character

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Vanilla by Darabuchi?
Is this the twilight zone, isn't it?

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Can you avoid using the word "poop" or any words related to that? It really kills the mood a bit...

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@Wilfriback Now that I've looked at it, most of his magazine publications are actually quite Vanilla. It's his doujins that he always tries to make as dark as possible.
Also, I would have preferred "I'm really feeling it" on page 12, but that's just me.

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I love how this site has become fakku. 2 years ago you didn't have people whining about NTR in everything. Why does it need to be mentioned?

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@johnnytrone
You're the first person who did though :V

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Next time I will tell someone to recite prime numbers to calm them down.

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"You Heretic!"
Heretic... Heresy... Horus Heresy... FOR THE EMPEROR!

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@johnnytrone
They were on this site too back then. I mean look at the vitriol among the comments on say, Carn translated works. Difference is, comments are deleted when they receive too much negative votes, so we don't see those anymore.

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something about the way the sentences are phrased seem off.
Like i cant really think of any other way to say them but it doesnt sound natural.
but otherwise at least i can tell whats going on

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I like how everything is vanilla, then boom! The dick that will destroy cities appears. Plus, ass to pussy without cleaning is a no-no.

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kinda takes me outta the experience there
no woman in their right mind- no matter how much of a nympho they are
would go from anal to vagina (without at least washing)

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Your breasts are lactating and you're still asking to be knocked up? As in you aren't already pregnant?

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@supercyc10
"no matter how much of a nympho they are"
You've got a pretty strict definition of "nympho," eh?

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I wish more impregnation stuff had the xray of the egg being fertilized, and less really weird dialogue as a replacement.

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"Your jizz is mixed up with my poop in my intestines" I'll never forget that.

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p. 14

I read p. 14 in Hank Hills voice and completely lost my boner

Welp...

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Well, I can see how some parts of this would really SHIT ON your mood!

@hafini: Not everybody is Enrico Pucci, my man.

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Huh, a girl open about her sex life to a male friend. Neat.

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