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[Shadow Fenrir] ToDoList Xtra: Fun Times With Friends (Gravity Falls, My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic)

Western
Posted:2016-05-13 05:59
Parent:928917
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:24.19 MiB
Length:20 pages
Favorited:974 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.70

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Posted on 06 April 2016, 15:01 by:   Flamespeak    PM
Score +203
I can't believe I am saying this, but, the story structure of this smut comic is all over the place. The characters are so poorly written that it hurts my brain and kills my boner. The art is actually really solid. If this comic were written in Japanese I would like it more because then I wouldn't see just how fucked it is.

I just gave a harsh critique of the dialog in comic based on anthropomorphic ponies having interspecies sex with a human. What the fuck am I doing with my life?
Posted on 06 April 2016, 18:19 by:   dope    PM
Score +84
Commenting on a one shot extra that's part of a full comic posted months ago.

The comic that started this will be more tantalizing to you. this is merely a "the cast gets a quickie before plot continues" comic.
Posted on 07 April 2016, 17:28 by:   BlackShadowKing    PM
Score -61
Damn You Dipper You Lucky Baster
You Are Living Every Bronies Dream
Posted on 14 April 2016, 00:14 by:   ccs4ever    PM
Score +85
This is a one shot side comic to the main comic:

https://e-hentai.org/g/901031/2975281d4b/

It was designed to be a fun bit of sexy fluff, while the main comic has a little more actual plot.
Posted on 15 April 2016, 18:24 by:   The Darkened Blue    PM
Score +52
pg. 13: Tada?! What kind of cumming sound is that? I mean, it's like "Tada! Here's the rabbit!" On second thought, it fits better than you'd think... Bring on the trumpet march! *black metal plays* That's not a trumpet march!
Posted on 15 April 2016, 19:20 by:   Dimitro    PM
Score +2
Typical Mary Sue...
Posted on 16 April 2016, 08:53 by:   glowingdemon    PM
Score +4
name that SNL reference.
also was the person who wrote this British?
I mean " tucking into ma tits"
Posted on 16 April 2016, 15:33 by:   ccs4ever    PM
Score +3
@glowingdemon

New England, actually :) I liked the alliteration of tuck and teat, and "tuck into" sounds like a southern US idiom to me; although, I may just be thinking of The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, making it a little out of date :P

I'm not the only writer on this chapter, but I did write that page and half the others.
Posted on 27 April 2016, 08:41 by:   SeedySkies    PM
Score +33
The dialogue was okay until Rainbowdash showed up, after which things flew off the rails. The rope-tying came out of no where and suddenly partners are changing every panel...
Posted on 25 May 2016, 10:42 by:   hellwolf    PM
Score +26
Here is the link to the artist's patreon page.

https://www.patreon.com/ShadowFenrir

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