Hello everyone!
This time i brought you the translation of one doujin from one of my recent favorite mangas, i was bored and suddenly found this doujin in my HDD so i decided to do it since it hasn´t a lot of text. Hope you like it, as always please read the second page first and if you detect any mistake or something please tell me to fix it :)

Holy shit, it's like you used Google translate and didn't even look it over.

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@Yesman71: Read the second page.

@Haolen: Thanks for this, didn't think there was r34 of this manga.

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Woah, didn't know that high score girl was popular enough in Japan to warrant doujins.

Much pleasure was had this day.

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aww it was just getting good and it ended.. qq.
thanks for translating. it's much better then raw.
i have discovered a new category for doujins... <3. morrigan so hot.

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@Haolen I kinda ended up reading high score girl and I honestly enjoyed reading it, thanks for the recommendation.

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Looks like SNK contributed so much drama that ironically made elevens know its existence.

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@Tripfag404: never forget rule 34 M8 !

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I read the manga thanks to this Doujin, so thanks the manga is really good

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@hacklol: True, but let's be happy the pr0n in this case isn't some deviantart scribbles with Kaiji-esque noses (´・ω・`)

@crono22: I did the exact same thing for Dagashi Kashi after I saw a doujin of it here a year ago.

Maybe next time someone new to anime or manga comes and asks us for recommendations we'll get them to climb the fjords?
I reckon it'd make for a pretty solid first impression of Japanese media as a whole.

Last edited on 16 May 2016, 23:01.

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Guile being a bro as always.

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holly shit, I was kinda worried because the original manga is so pure, but this was written so in-character that is hard to believe this is actually fan-made.

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ITS. OT FAIR THAT THE GIRL WHO HAS IT ALL BEATS THE GIRL WHO WORKED HER WAY UP FROM NOTHING

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The premise of the doujin is cute. It's short but it fits the characters well. I appreciate the effort @Haolen but the sentence structure and word choice in your translation is very bad. I can piece together most things through context, but you really need to do further translations with an english speaker editing your translations. They don't need to know japanese, they just need to be able to write english and be able to communicate with you so that your finished product does not have such obvious mistakes.

Art 7. Plot 6. Sexiness 5. Translation 2. True to character 8. All out of 10.

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