Front Page
Watched
Popular
Torrents
Favorites
My Home
My Uploads
Toplists
Bounties
News
Forums
Wiki
HentaiVerse

[KinoeBi] SecretVanilla [English] [LeGenjutsu]

[KinoeBi] SecretVanilla [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2016-06-11 00:01
Parent:943608
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:6.25 MiB
Length:14 pages
Favorited:333 times
Rating:
132
Average: 4.38

Showing 1 - 14 of 14 images

<1>
01
02
03
04
05
06
07
08
09
10
11
12
13
14
<1>
Posted on 11 June 2016, 00:01 by:   LeGenjutsu    PM
Uploader Comment
MILF, Vietnamese version is later.
Posted on 10 June 2016, 15:20 by:   nobody_xxx    PM
Score +33
english version , yay (◕‿◕✿)

really fast translation , thanks for your quick work , LeGenjutsu ((´☻ω☻`)◞౪◟(´☻ω☻`))

kinoebi sensei drawing is really amazing , quickly become one of my fav artist in EH already with his/her 2 works here (*≧ω≦)

the title really match up this manga story
Posted on 10 June 2016, 15:55 by:   NekoHime27    PM
Score +43
@nobody_xxx Did you set up a bot to comment on every gallery? lmao you're everywhere
Posted on 10 June 2016, 16:45 by:   hafini    PM
Score +37
Now the first thing i do in a gallery is seeing if nobody_xxx has commented on it or not
Posted on 10 June 2016, 18:07 by:   Battousai124    PM
Score +43
Thank You for the quick translation, BUT
Please Re-edit, the english seems very rough^^ but Here are my suggestions.

Page 2 - Panel 2 - - Neither...
Page 3 - Panel 1 - Upper Bubble - Good Morning Ran-san.
- Panel 2 - Upper Right Bubble - The Weather today is nice today too, isn't it?! Aren't you busy, Raku?
- Upper Left Bubble - ...I'm Carefree for Now.
Page 4 - Panel 1 - First Block - A Wife who isn't Mine...
- Panel 3 - Block - Her gentle Touch seems to bring the Spring to Life
Page 6 - Panel 3 - Upper Right Bubble - Ran-ah...
- Upper Left Bubble - Ran-sa-ah...
Page 7 - Panel 2 - Right Bubble - Ran-san..You Already are...Soaking...
- Upper Left Bubble - I...Stick your dick into me...
- Panel 3 - 2nd Block-Ran - san's Sweetness
- Panel 4 - Block - Her flowery Insides are so soft...
Page 8 - Panel 1 - 1st Block - Each time I rub the Inside of Ran-san's Pussy
- 2nd Block - I feel like...I'm in Heaven
- Panel 2 - Upper Bubble - Ran-san...!
Page 9 - Panel 1 - Right Bubble - You can do It...Cum...
- Panel 2 - Lower Bubble - Ran-san...
- Panel 3 - Right Bubble - S-Seriously...
- Lower Right Bubble - Raku...You have to do what I say...
- Upper Left Bubble - So...You...
- Left Bubble - Have to Cum...Inside Me...
- Panel 4 - Block - Ran-san
Page 10 - Panel 1 - Upper Block - Ran-san
- Panel 4 - Left Bubble - the second sentence -I dont get it, but it seems out of place or translation or both
Page 12 - Panel 3 - Right Block - This Relationship, I can't let it stay like this...
- Left Block - and this increasing suffering, could it be from Love Fever?
Posted on 10 June 2016, 20:05 by:   FO-Bakayarou    PM
Score +17
@Battousai124 -- Ran-san calls him Raku-kun, in case you weren't aware. :-)
Posted on 11 June 2016, 00:00 by:   LeGenjutsu    PM
Score +17
@Battousai124
Thanks for your advice. I'll update something.
And some details are hard. Like these:
- Page 7: She said "おしゃぶり", means "teething ring", slang "nipples". So, I used "stick". Well, "dick" is good too, I think.
- Page 9: She means: "Saying no is not good".
- Page 10: "ムラムラ" means "be horny/be turned on". I'll fix this, too.
- Page 12: He thinks he got "fever" but not "love fever" because he really don't know it then. Next page, he said waiting for the heat cools down.
- I don't keep honorifics such as: -san or -kun. English doesn't use it, I think. Maybe Raku calls Ran "aunt", depending on their original relationship.
I'm glad to get more opinions.
Posted on 11 June 2016, 02:25 by:   GuroLover12    PM
Score -40
stop fucking upvoting nobody. he is a bot.
Posted on 11 June 2016, 06:38 by:   nobody_xxx    PM
Score +53
;lol:

I'm not bot <_<

I just have more free time now since my ping to HV is bad lately ~ so spend more effort in gallery now :D

what the point for botting in gallery , not profitable plus I don't even know how to make scipts :)

@bro chung2795

kapan mau rilis mutsukinya :P

[Post New Comment]

Front   LoFi   Forums   HentaiVerse   Wiki   Twitter   ToS   Advertise