>see some weird phrasing
>check the uploader like I should have five minutes ago
>it's CGrascal
Every time.

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based tanabe kyou. thanks for the late night treat!

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Oh my god, this looks perfe-

>CGrascal

Every time

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>Tanabe Kyou
>big breasts

wait wat

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big breasts??????

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Every man's dream, dang.

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I really don't feel like this deserves the poor grammar tag anymore; CGRascal's works have improved a bit over the past few months. Is it perfect? No, but most translations rarely are; I could still read it without really ever fumbling or getting confused about the wording or sentence structure of something like I used to in his older translations.

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magical girl? did i miss something?

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Jesus CGRascal, good tastes, but please stop "translating" good artists.

@Dante456:
Here are some rebuttals.
film critics? "you can't criticize movies unless you can make better ones yourself!"
you don't have to be a hen to point out the egg is rotten
you know who criticised this too? hitler. There's a reason why his name sounds like shitler.

Last edited on 16 June 2016, 22:15.

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Whoa whoa whoa, hold the fuck up.
>Tanabe Kyou
>big breasts
Is this bizzaro Earth?

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>big breasts

aww I was hoping for budding loli tits, they're the best thing about Tanabe Kyou works

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@Mitsukai123, while it is true that a number of CGRascal's recent galleries weren't that bad, this one is awful. The criterion is 10 grammatical mistakes per 40 pages and this is easily 10+ in 24 pages.

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>The criterion is 10 grammatical mistakes per 40 pages and this is easily 10+ in 24 pages.
Correct.
And the correct way to add the poor grammar tag is to comment and list enough for the tag to qualify; right now, people voting on the tag are seen as blindly hating on CGRascal.

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I suspect CGRascal is not a person but a team. Because occasionally once in a long while we get relatively decent translations like this, and it's not the first time a CGRascal translation has turned out good. And then later we get another epic grammar fail that only CGRascal is capable of.

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Still waiting for idiots upset at CGRascal to do better. No one actually does though.

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Like a wise man once said to me, if you want something done right then do it yourself. Yup still waiting the people who complain to do the better job.

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Tanabe Kyou is going out of its game, I repeat, Tanabe Kyou stepping out of its usual game!
This really is the first work that includes big breasts from Tanabe Kyou afaik.
It's like witnessing an usual all big boobs artist going loli for the first time. Huh.

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Great story! Enough said about that.
I won't criticize, yet I will ask again that CGRascal please Quality Check your work or have someone more qualified do it for you. I'll do it for you. PM me and I will give you my info so you can send me the translation. I'll check it for free and send it back. I hope that will help.
Thanks for the work you do. Please just check it.

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Tanabe Kyou? CHECK!
CGRascal? wel... check
Hotmilk censorshit...SHIT....

Nice work anyway dude...

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Its such a crime to censor Tanabe Kyo's art.

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I'd really like to see a chapter 2 of this, damn. I'd re-edit the damn work, but I need the source for it and I can't find HOTMILK 2016-06 anywhere. Make do with this for now and maybe I'll remember (hopefully) to do the damn thing again once the source is out.

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Would people just shut up and enjoy the sweet loli and big breasts. This was diabetes as fuck and i loved it.

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Sequel plux.

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This was a really, really cute story. Once she finds an guy she actually likes, she drops the bar and goes exclusive. So nice... <3

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I need more of such oppai loli goodies, please recommend xD

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