Translated from Chinese!
Here is original: https://e-hentai.org/g/654256/8237dbb880/

Base +4, Lazarusk +6, jfragrettel +7, Bane13 +47

Thank you for translating!!!

Base +6, Lazarusk +6, jfragrettel +7, TIE_Defender2nd +10

now i wanna know what happend for yo and admiral alter

Base +7, ignisbadguy +6, Hue_Hue +6, TIE_Defender2nd +10

pg 05, "wait for refills." (delete "it").
pg 06, "into the enemy base?" (missing "the").
"I will disguise myself." (missing "will")
pg 07, "determined to attack that he is making us come late!!"
pg 09, "It's so good that it makes me" (missing "it")
pg 10, "Since my kid is hungry" (should be "is" not "are", unless we are talking of "kids" in the plural)
pg 17, "She is the enemy" (missing "the")
pg 18, "fairies' stomach" (delete the second "s" after the ' in it)
pg 20, "results" (needs to be plural).
"didn't she?" (it should be "she" not "her")

Base +6, fzfuckjs +5, jfragrettel +7, Zelinko +9, Kizuro Shirosaki +6, StormofGreed +6

How dare you steal bauxite from Akagi!

Base +39, jfragrettel +7, finnick8 +6, ignisbadguy -6, susu_357 +6, unknownshadows +5, TIE_Defender2nd +10, TheClemenable +9

Wo is so badass in this, her disguise looked pretty solid too.

Base +8, notgonnapost +5, ignisbadguy +6, finnick8 +7, unknownshadows +5, TIE_Defender2nd +10, musoukaXIV +10, GGS +10