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(SC2015 Summer) [Kamishiki (Kamizuki Shiki)] Taihou ga Shinkai Seikan ni Ochitara (Kantai Collection -KanColle-) [English] [NepNep]

(サンクリ2015 Summer) [かみしき (守月史貴)] 大鳳が深海棲艦に堕チタラ (艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-) [英訳]

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Posted:2016-08-14 14:27
Parent:964707
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Language:English  TR
File Size:140.7 MiB
Length:21 pages
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Posted on 14 August 2016, 14:27 by:   rokusanji    PM
Uploader Comment
Drawn by Kamizuki Shiki
His website: http://kamishiki.net/
Please support the artist by buying his works on Alice book (overseas shipping)
http://alice-books.com/item/list/all?circle_id=5179&adult_only=1

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/867318/6b2509857b/

Prequel: https://e-hentai.org/g/973224/5791155c89/

Sequel: https://e-hentai.org/g/970762/ef991abb9e/

Friendly reminder that artists need money to buy pizza, sushi, rice, lettuce, cabbage, beans or whatever it is, to live and draw porns

[page 04 missing word updated
I'm sorry for the inconvenience]
Posted on 13 August 2016, 13:13 by:   Hakrei    PM
Score +87
Nice, the prequel to https://e-hentai.org/g/892225/d63993afe1/
Taihou is cute even as an abyssal...
Thanks for sharing!
Posted on 13 August 2016, 13:21 by:   Noreally    PM
Score +87
>Triggering dat death flag

Well, I'm glad things worked out for them. They were a cute couple. Thanks for the upload!
Posted on 14 August 2016, 00:39 by:   nabusco    PM
Score +49
Page 19

That Taihou under the bed.
HNNNG
Posted on 14 August 2016, 07:35 by:   (*σ´I`)σ    PM
Score +70
WTF 140mb when the raw is 20mb https://e-hentai.org/g/964707/c11bf476b1/
Posted on 14 August 2016, 07:51 by:   rokusanji    PM
Score -8
@(*σ´I`)σ it's magic
Posted on 20 August 2016, 00:33 by:   Biodeamon    PM
Score +20
absyal versions of shipgirls give me life
Posted on 11 March 2017, 05:13 by:   Arkper    PM
Score +18
Some grammar and phrasing issues. The most glaring is on page 13: "The easy to shy Taihou that I know...". Shy is not a verb, and to quote Calvin and Hobbes, "Verbing weirds language."

EDIT:
p. 2
"What had happened to me, I wonder..." -> "I wonder what has happened to me..." or "I wonder what happened to me..."
"With 'that person'..." -> "With him..."

p. 3
"I mean, our battle is still..." -> "I mean, the war is still..."
"There ya go with those boring things again" -> "There ya go, saying those silly things again" (Boring does not make sense in context.)
"When this operation is over... From today onward, you're free from" -> "After this operation, you'll be free from" (Conflicting temporal clauses)

p. 4
Nearly all the "bridge bunny"-type talk (double-barred word polygons) is phrased very awkwardly.
first two boxes -> "Admiral, we've lost contact with Taihou! She's no longer appearing on radar!!"
"What is the damage control team doing?!" "They couldn't be there in time, so it's likely that Taihou advanced on her own while being badly damaged." A damage control team is not something that is sent out to a ship. Also, it doesn't make sense that Taihou chose to advance because the damage control team didn't get there.
Last edited on 12 March 2017, 00:42.
Posted on 23 February 2021, 13:44 by:   Squalos    PM
Score +6
Aww, Taihou...

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