This one's a rather personal side project, but I did ask L-san if its fine to release it under this group and he agreed. There's another release coming soon (this time, its Touhou). Also I'm planning on doing the other four Forest Village imas doujins, but I can't find the scan for the second book ; n;

Good work.

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The erase marks of the original Japanese Text can still clearly be seen.

I don't know how you could've missed that. Something with the brightness of your screen maybe?

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I had a huge smile plastered across my face while reading this. Thanks for translating!

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@Friedsiopao I guess? I've asked most of my friends and said it was already okay so I just disregarded the erase marks. To begin with, the entire doujin was purple white so it can also probably be that

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This and https://e-hentai.org/g/631342/1c889d6b39/ are probably the best Idolmaster doujinshi, by far.

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@RaymooHakure

You're the one already editing/doing work on the doujin. It's your responsibility to ensure the quality of your releases. The glaring erasemarks are a massive detriment to the quality of your work.

"I just disregarded the erasemarks" is a very bad attitude to hold.

For example, this erasemark issue is something that can easily be remedied by playing around with brightness/contrast settings a tiny bit.

Case in point: http://oi66.tinypic.com/w0p89y.jpg

Doesn't that look better? Make use of the other tools and functions of whatever editing software you use. Don't just slap text on things and call it a day.

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@friedsiopao Trust me, I've already spent an entire day trying to fix that while constantly nagging L-san if its fine already. At the end of it, we just decided to release it as is.

I've been typesetting on and off for a long time already, and I know its a bad remark on the other works I've already finished like https://e-hentai.org/g/827115/952805dd6b/, but as I've said, its most likely on my end of the monitor that I can't see if its "gray" or not, even if I've set the levels and brightness correctly.

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@friedsiopao

Stop your whining and enjoy. Or shut up and do better. FFS.

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@Deep Lurker

You do realize he's not whining right? What he said was legitimate criticism towards the typesetter/editor, and he did give an example of how to correct it. I mean the guy has solid points and he's trying to get us better quality translations (for us), so I don't get why you're so antagonistic towards him.

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For a second, I thought we were talking about the Grand Blue (the manga) variation of Oolong Tea, where it's nine parts vodka, one part whiskey. You know, for science.

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Takeuchi-P is best girl. This is undefiable truth

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@p4: p-kun best cinderella. Would root for.

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