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Zuko's Mom Peril by Delly

Western
Posted:2016-09-20 16:53
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:7.35 MiB
Length:7 pages
Favorited:127 times
Rating:
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Average: 2.77

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Posted on 20 September 2016, 16:53 by:   doowaffles    PM
Uploader Comment
Will be adding more images as they get completed....
Posted on 20 September 2016, 18:55 by:   Zazlamel Arentoch    PM
Score +201
We're fine, really. We don't need any more images...
Posted on 20 September 2016, 19:00 by:   chÄ¥rdbh    PM
Score -22
I thank you for this, and look forward to more! :D
Posted on 20 September 2016, 19:46 by:   Pumpking    PM
Score +0
lol zazlamel.
well, it is true that some can draw arousing things without showing nudity, and some can draw naked characters from well known cartoons and still not be able to make it look alluring.
still, good going, dalle. whoever you are.
Posted on 21 September 2016, 02:34 by:   doowaffles    PM
Score +2
Wow, I guess the internet is full of critics....jeez. Any more constructive ideas for making it more "alluring"?
Posted on 21 September 2016, 04:05 by:   lucasnator    PM
Score +6
Ursa just does not give a shit
Posted on 21 September 2016, 17:57 by:   RabidTanker    PM
Score +18
My advice on making this alluring?

The human glans usually isn't an dark shade of blue and you might be overdoing it on the MILF's anus and genitalia. And speaking of the MILF, I think you made her hips, thighs, ass, and tits an little to big in proportion to the rest of her body. I mean, she looks like some skinny chick just gained an lot of fat only in the "erotic" places. I would've been fine if was some combination of her boobs and ass getting the sex appeal treatment, but that tactic doesn't always work on an walking skeleton.

But don't let me stop you from finishing this. Just remember that it's easy to piss people off with low-quality artwork.
Posted on 22 September 2016, 15:38 by:   Uber_Troll    PM
Score +13
ignore the haters, this is hot please continue.
Posted on 22 September 2016, 20:21 by:   doowaffles    PM
Score -6
I will continue making art that I like (and a few others). Thanks for the note specifics on some improvements. I like the shock factor whether that means big genitals or no head. But there is definitely room for improvement.. the notion of people being "pissed iff" is pretty funny. How many of these whiners actually attempt to draw anything themselves? Do they think I'm a trained artist? Do I get paid for this? It's just a hobby I like. I guess they'd rather complain about other people while they masturbate than contribute anything.
Posted on 24 October 2016, 22:14 by:   AceofWind    PM
Score +6
I'm assuming most of the criticism stems from expecting this to turn into guro and cannibalism as it progresses.
Posted on 28 October 2016, 00:00 by:   Bloopman    PM
Score +1
Yeah, that's the direction I personally wouldn't want to see it go. It's not so much the art is bad, though if I had to give it a critique I'd say the proportions are a bit odd with the hips/waist/ass area, like it doesn't look that human to me. But, if that's your aesthetic, I'd be lying if I said there weren't any non-perfectly human shapes that I've jerked to.
Posted on 20 November 2016, 03:37 by:   doowaffles    PM
Score -6
ok you are right i was going to go guro with this. and yeah most hentai is on the fringes of what real people look like dont you think. it fantasy, its hot!

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