My translation of this work by Chijoku An: http://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ053697.html

I should first warn you that this is one of Chijoku An's more early works and as such it has, except for the cover, no accompanying pictures whatsoever in it... So if you dislike walls of text, this is where you might want to turn around and leave, I guess... To those of you who still like it but wish that there were pics to accompany it, I can only say that the next Chijoku An works whose translation is the closest to completetion will have more pics and with a bit of luck you'll see that one around the end of this year or beginning of the next... However, just so you know, you will see at least one more 'text only' Chijoku An story translated by me at some point...

Now for the boring stuff: I'm not a native english speaker, and not all that good with japanese either and I work alone on top of it, making errors harder to spot even though I try my best... So apologies in advance for any such errors of mine you spot! Otherwise, Enjoy!

HKE: If I actually worked full time on'em, I'd guess it'd take at least three-four weeks to arrive at a 'rough, unchecked draft' of a complete translation of this... But since I don't and work on a 'now and then' basis in general for the stuff I translate, it takes considerably longer to arrive there. Looking at the text file of the prologue... It was created the 12th November last year, so this work has taken almost a full year to complete.

ast4 & imercenary: Sorry about that, it's just that the Wild Words font has become the one I'm most comfortable with using. I'm open to suggestions, especially regarding text size; not entirely sure what's the best option there, I admit, but I'd still prefer to use an 'all caps' font even if it's not the best option...

Urgil Bougie: Well, I can't say you don't have some good points - I have said myself before that this isn't exactly the ideal site for novels - but then again, where else? But on the other hand... If you search for 'novel' on this site, you'll find more thna a hundred pages worth of novels that have been uploaded since 2007. And quite a few of those are the same kind of novels as this one - no pics save for the cover, only text... So if nothing else, there's precedent for this and the fact that it's 'just' a translation of an existing japanese work probably helps there too...

blackyawgdom: I'll leave that for the experts to judge. I'd love Novels getting a category of their own though, but it's probably too much to hope for...

cipherblaze: I intend to translate other works by Chijoku An, yes.

newzealand: Currently, no, but I'd like to somehow make'em available as text files at the very least, but for now that's something for the future...

Jesus fucking Christ 109 pages of translated Japanese ........ seriously? Like just how long it took you cos it is hard to get translators to do 20-25ish pages of hmanga that has a few spoken lines and you just translated like the length of a whole tankoubon .... good job though m8

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A guy come to your house claim has kidnap your daughter and demand you to became his slave
quick, what do you do ?
OBEY and became his dick sucker & fuck toy(go full homo & masochist)
if I were the husband I gonna tie and torture him 24/7 but ah, look like hentai logic strike again

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the same can be said if we talk how the repetitive/rehashed Netorare stuff out there has some horrible logic too when some fat fugly balding dude """""" blackmails """""" some woman into " submission " but hey , people eat the shit by the truckloads here, also ignoring that Netorare essentially means you love being cuckloded, I would understand the Netori stuff since you are supposed to be the guy doing the wife/girlfriend stealing and the feel that such feat grants you but, oh well as alot people has said here that this should be a place to fap not to have a discussing because it seems alot people think that there shouldnt be possible to have intelligent conversations/debates if the topic evolves erotic stuff

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@HKE the problem is the audience are subhuman cucks

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I don't think wild words is an appropriate font for a novel like this. We are used to it in speech bubbles but for longer text having a mixed case font makes word shapes more distinct and quicker to read.

BASICALLY READING LONG AMOUNTS OF TEXT IN ALL CAPS IS TIRING.

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看个毛啊

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I haven't finished reading it yet so I'll withhold on commenting on that, but this is so hard to read. The font and the text size is absolutely terrible for reading long lengths of text.

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If only there was a pastebin mirror or the like for this.

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Thanks a ton

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@HKE

I find it hard to understand that you want intelligent conversations/debates when you start off like that and act like trolls similar to Nekohunter33?

It's unfortunate that there there's no way to ban trolls in this website.

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I stated my opinion just like you and we can continue this convo by posting out our opinions and such , Im glad this website hasnt become yet a fully echo chamber that you block/ban people "just because fuck you, that is why" type of way , however since user here get +/- votes your comments can get buried quite fast if its something not everyone agrees on liek someone saying that likes guro (2D one) or yaoi and it get downvoted to damnation to never been seen again. I personally like to skip on niceties and give out my raw opinion without caring who i offend so that is why my comments feel "trollish" or "aggresive" if we may but then again it is difficult to give context to what i am saying in written form than in a chat where you can discerning more what I am trying to say rather than take my comments on a literal case.

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Nothing to do here!

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That poor bastard.
Thanks for the translation darkspooky!

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The real problem with NTR stuff is that it comes from a very Japanese mentality. I know a dozen girls that if you said, "I'll blackmail you if you don't sex me right now!" They'd literally tear your fucking balls off on the spot and go, "Maybe the doctor can reattach these, if you give me that blackmail material back right now." And of course there's the part where a guy with a big dick fucks them senseless, like yes, every human only cares about sex and only women break when overstimulated. Ignoring that women can cum more times than men easily, retain their common sense after orgasm where most men hit cloud nine and become cuckoolanders for several minutes, and have been shown through studies (in broad terms here, people, I'm talking over 70% is most) to actually care less about dick size as long as it is at least average.

So whenever I read a story where a guy with a dick the size of an arm fucks a woman into mindlessness I lose my ability to suspend disbelief because of the above facts and flaws. Now, some people like it, and that's fine, but I can't believe the people who do don't get really bored reading the same set up for the same pay off in every. Single. Hentai.

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I like pictures/art... not books.

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First off, full disclosure: I didn't read the story, so I won't opine on it's contents. Comments have me thinking the story's nature isn't for me, which is fine. I will say to DarkSpooky, great job doing all this. I can tell it is a huge labour of love and it is efforts like yours that make it possible to find a wealth of new stuff on the web every day, something for everyone.
My objection is that I don't consider pages and pages of text should be made into image form. Instead one of many story sites should host the story in text form. The complication here is that it is on dlsite, and would mean I am implying a difference between what I feel this site should have vs. dlsite's own policies for content. Perhaps I am. I suppose I have been ok with stories that are walls of text but very sparse with images, though I do feel cheated by them. But in this case, there's only a cover image... it just feels like it's gone too far.
A fair counter argument, if we only speak of you from a selfish standpoint, and not about the general enjoyment of visitors to this site, is that you do reach an audience you wouldn't have otherwise by posting to a story site. It does make this story stand out in a way, merely by being different on this site vs. similar on a story site.
Anyway, just wanted to share my overall feeling. I wouldn't have posted this comment anyway (because what good is it to complain?) if not to share my admiration for DarkSpooky's great effort, but nor could I only say the good without also saying the bad, so I present it all together. Thank you for letting me say my piece.

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@urgil bougie
Well, where else can he post it for an interested audience and reasonably expect it to stay online? Is there even a site for translating Japanese erotic novels, crossed with a "gallery" and a robust archive feature? I agree that a text file would be easier to read if I wanted to read it, but if you don't like it just exclude novels and walls of text from your search. I've already spent years ignoring most western, work, various fetishes, samples, (and anything ever posted by mikelous) without difficulty.

He's welcome to post the text version at this forum though: http://tgboard.rf.gd/
Update, this forum: https://endchan.xyz/tsf/

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锻炼英文阅读的时候到了

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Should prob reclass this under MISC....

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@HKE - the reason it takes so long is that they have to edit the text into the page cleanly

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Good job, great translation, hopefully you can translate other works by this artist

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Wonder if you will translate other works of theirs?

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@DarkSpooky

As presumptuous as it of me to say, is it possible to get this in a non-image format? Like, a PDF or a .txt file?
I really appreciate the copious amounts of work put into this, but I don't want to read 109 pages of all caps wildwords on a white background...

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@newzealand run the gallery through an OCR program (optical character recognition).

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Pictures of text. smh

This exists solely to remind the rest of us, "when your only tool is a hammer, everything starts to look like a nail."

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RAW, please?

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