Cuvie can draw some cute-ass and hot characters!!

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Couple of typos aside, I see nothing egregiously bad about this translation that would get this tagged with "bad grammar."

Your typesetting leaves a lot to be desired, though. If there's one thing you should take away from all this, it's that text centering is your friend.

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I agree it doesn't deserve the "bad grammar" tag; that said, typos aside, the script feels a little stiff. I'd suspect the translator isn't a native English speaker.

Also some lines are a bit off, example pg. 04: "I want to tickle him / He smells nice"
Pretty sure it's the guy's POV, so it should be more : "I feel ticklish / And there's a nice smell" or something like that. (くすぐったい is an adjective, not a －たい verb according to the dictionary.)

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Every time I see the bad grammar, I wonder if it's not just a tag telling you the script is shit, but if there's an actual fetish for reading bad grammar on hentai.

Like what if it's the only way they can get off, how would they consistently find new material? Fuck, and I thought futa cbt was a hard fetish to find stuff for.

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>Sucking nipples is ticking. (bad translation > I confirm what Faeldrin said, it's guy's POV)
>People get stiff when they are tired. (bad translation > it's excitation not stiffness)
Mkay, I didn't know about that.

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It seems some people just can't realize a one simple thing - it's a fucking porn,it's not a fucking Shakespeare,the original script is somewhat on a 8 y/o level,dafuq do you expect even?
(well no wonder,people are dumb as fuck mostly)

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@NoPityy - It's a matter of immersion more than anything. If you're deep into reading something and suddenly you come across a part that makes you think 'wait, what?', obviously that's going to have an effect on your experience. Some people have a higher tolerance for grammar mistakes than others (and forgive me for assuming from the way you write that your tolerance for such things is particularly high), but ideally a translation should be so smooth that it draws no attention to its mechanical aspects, allowing the reader to give their full attention to the artistry.

It's interesting - and somewhat ironic - that you should mention Shakespeare, actually: don't you think it would be even more distracting to the reader to have to read a translation in Ye Olde Shakespearean English than a translation like this?

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Let's just agree on that I'm not the best translator around. I admit, I rushed this translation (very much, you wouldn't believe how much). I'll edit it somewhere in the future. But for now, let's just fap and move along. It is kind of readable, and some enthusiast could translate it better, using my gallery as a base.

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@magnanimus
Would explain how CGRascal still is able to do what he does, kek.

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This isn't "Sole Male", "Sole Female", OR "Full Censorship." What moron added those tags?

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