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(C91) [Kawaraya Honpo (Kawaraya A-ta)] Pokapoka Onedari Onsen (Neon Genesis Evangelion) [English] [kargarok1]

(C91) [瓦屋本舗 (瓦屋A太)] ポカポカおねだり温泉 (新世紀エヴァンゲリオン) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2017-05-06 03:18
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Language:English  TR
File Size:197.1 MiB
Length:52 pages
Favorited:1875 times
Rating:
428
Average: 4.57

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Posted on 06 May 2017, 03:18 by:   kargarok1    PM
Uploader Comment
Got antsy as hell waiting for this to be translated so I up and did it myself.
Edited, typsetted, and translated by me. I'm pretty darn confident in my translation for this but there are some pages I felt a little sketchy on, but even on those few, I believe I got the appropriate meaning through words while also maintaining personality for the characters. This being said, please call me out on any poorly translated lines. For learning and accuracy purposes. Also think we need to take a moment to appreciate typsetters from around the globe because fifty pages of that shit by myself got pretty tedious (still pretty fun though). Let me know if you like the fonts or hate them. I'll most likely definitely change and edit anything you suggest. This comic is hot as hell. Support this artist if you can.
Posted on 06 May 2017, 03:48 by:   piyin    PM
Score +56
Good job translating it!

There are some minor etails here and there but this work doesnt ask for anything to more "Professional Translation works" (there are some PRETTY BAD examples here and there).

If you id this alone you are Super, Man! (Or Superman, if you like, ;-))

P.S. The text on ayanamis dialogues is in that font because it kinda sounds monotone, right?
Posted on 06 May 2017, 03:58 by:   kargarok1    PM
Score +40
@piyin

Thanks man. Yeah, doing this all by myself gives me a newfound respect for editors and (GOOD) type setters alike. Always got disappointed from bad or bland type setting but now I can understand why some want to take a lazy way. Some lines I was kind of sketchy on the meaning, like where Asuka is talking about being saved by Rei, or in the very beginning where Rei says she's fine with not making Asuka do any requests (there are probably like 2 or 3 other examples) but I tried really hard scraping from the overall context and feel of the dialogue to get the meaning out, and like I said I'm pretty confident in that. Any other mistake is probably from me knowing EXACTLY what they're saying, but if I put it down in words, it would sound really wonky to the reader so I spend several minutes trying to think of an English substitute that still holds great accuracy but also gives the reader more clarity and enjoyment. Really fucking didn't want to see this series, artist, or comic fall into non-translated obscurity or irrelevancy so I tried my darn hardest here. And yeah I wanted to pick a nice looking font that wasn't fucking Anime Ace for Rei but also didn't want something super flashy cause... she's Rei. Most instances I think her font works really well. Anyway thanks a lot man, really appreciate the feedback. Who knows, if people are really pleased, maybe I'll do this shit more often starting with his Street Fighter doujin.
Posted on 06 May 2017, 04:23 by:   kaizer_emperor    PM
Score +27
Wohoo thanks man, good translation and keep the good woks
Posted on 06 May 2017, 04:23 by:   God Revan    PM
Score +61
He's never going to stop with Rei and Asuka....and I approve. Never stop!
Posted on 06 May 2017, 04:37 by:   PepeFrog    PM
Score +15
This is waaayyy too much Rei and Asuka for poor ol' Shinji "Get in the fucking robot!" Ikari to handle.
I mean really, look at them!
They would obliterate Shinji's asspuss with those! https://e-hentai.org/s/2daca02955/750824-12
He'll end up bringing a second rebirth to the world... again!
Posted on 06 May 2017, 05:32 by:   ForteGK    PM
Score -68
The typesetting is pretty awful. Not even centering on the bubbles...
Posted on 06 May 2017, 05:44 by:   kargarok1    PM
Score +32
@ForteGK

I think like 90% of them are centered. Anything else was because it couldn't fit or something. Give an example?
Posted on 06 May 2017, 16:36 by:   piyin    PM
Score +41
@ForteGK
"The typesetting is pretty awful. Not even centering on the bubbles..."

Coming from someone who has only copied the work of other guys and uploading it to the galleries, yep, you are in ALL THE RIGHT TO CRITICIZE THE SWEAT, BLOOD (?), TIME AND LIFE SOMEONE WHO ACTUALLY DID ALL THE WORK BY HIMSELF.

Why dont you do the same with a 50 pages work and then you come back? Lets see if you bite as you bark!
Posted on 06 May 2017, 16:47 by:   kargarok1    PM
Score +45
@piyin

blood, sweat, and cum. Lots and lots of cum.
Posted on 06 May 2017, 18:40 by:   Bronsko    PM
Score +47
Wooooooohooooooooo, finally in english! :D Yeah, let's do this! :D

EDIT: Fuck, what a beautiful birthday present! :D
Last edited on 07 May 2017, 02:13.
Posted on 06 May 2017, 21:25 by:   SexStarvedMutie    PM
Score +20
Maybe we see some futa asuka on misato?
Last edited on 18 July 2017, 13:45.
Posted on 07 May 2017, 05:30 by:   Dejanus    PM
Score +69
I love the progression from "tsun" to "dere" Asuka has made in this series. And thank god this one had no Mari
Posted on 07 May 2017, 16:24 by:   kargarok1    PM
Score +26
@Dejanus

I agree on love for the dere but I couldn't hate Mari as much as most people do. In most of the others ESPECIALLY Summer Memories, she's pretty much the sole reason Asuka goes dere as fuck. Asuka being on the receiving end is hot as hell
Last edited on 07 May 2017, 16:45.
Posted on 02 September 2017, 00:56 by:   user00    PM
Score +36
Why is there a nipple fuck tag?
Did I miss it or something or accidentally skip it?
Posted on 02 September 2017, 04:43 by:   kargarok1    PM
Score +20
@user00 pretty sure cause like Asuka literally fucks rei with her nipple early on
Posted on 15 September 2017, 21:24 by:   vdate    PM
Score +22
This is late to the party for sure, but you're a hero for doing this, chief.
Posted on 17 September 2017, 18:29 by:   kargarok1    PM
Score +20
@vdate
thanks mate. Still waiting on the scans for his C92 doujin :(

https://e-hentai.org/g/1119210/bd84cea899/
Last edited on 02 October 2017, 23:08.

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