Good job translating it!

There are some minor etails here and there but this work doesnt ask for anything to more "Professional Translation works" (there are some PRETTY BAD examples here and there).

If you id this alone you are Super, Man! (Or Superman, if you like, ;-))

P.S. The text on ayanamis dialogues is in that font because it kinda sounds monotone, right?

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@piyin

Thanks man. Yeah, doing this all by myself gives me a newfound respect for editors and (GOOD) type setters alike. Always got disappointed from bad or bland type setting but now I can understand why some want to take a lazy way. Some lines I was kind of sketchy on the meaning, like where Asuka is talking about being saved by Rei, or in the very beginning where Rei says she's fine with not making Asuka do any requests (there are probably like 2 or 3 other examples) but I tried really hard scraping from the overall context and feel of the dialogue to get the meaning out, and like I said I'm pretty confident in that. Any other mistake is probably from me knowing EXACTLY what they're saying, but if I put it down in words, it would sound really wonky to the reader so I spend several minutes trying to think of an English substitute that still holds great accuracy but also gives the reader more clarity and enjoyment. Really fucking didn't want to see this series, artist, or comic fall into non-translated obscurity or irrelevancy so I tried my darn hardest here. And yeah I wanted to pick a nice looking font that wasn't fucking Anime Ace for Rei but also didn't want something super flashy cause... she's Rei. Most instances I think her font works really well. Anyway thanks a lot man, really appreciate the feedback. Who knows, if people are really pleased, maybe I'll do this shit more often starting with his Street Fighter doujin.

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Wohoo thanks man, good translation and keep the good woks

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He's never going to stop with Rei and Asuka....and I approve. Never stop!

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This is waaayyy too much Rei and Asuka for poor ol' Shinji "Get in the fucking robot!" Ikari to handle.
I mean really, look at them!
They would obliterate Shinji's asspuss with those! https://e-hentai.org/s/2daca02955/750824-12
He'll end up bringing a second rebirth to the world... again!

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The typesetting is pretty awful. Not even centering on the bubbles...

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@ForteGK

I think like 90% of them are centered. Anything else was because it couldn't fit or something. Give an example?

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@ForteGK
"The typesetting is pretty awful. Not even centering on the bubbles..."

Coming from someone who has only copied the work of other guys and uploading it to the galleries, yep, you are in ALL THE RIGHT TO CRITICIZE THE SWEAT, BLOOD (?), TIME AND LIFE SOMEONE WHO ACTUALLY DID ALL THE WORK BY HIMSELF.

Why dont you do the same with a 50 pages work and then you come back? Lets see if you bite as you bark!

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@piyin

blood, sweat, and cum. Lots and lots of cum.

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Wooooooohooooooooo, finally in english! :D Yeah, let's do this! :D

EDIT: Fuck, what a beautiful birthday present! :D

Last edited on 07 May 2017, 02:13.

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Maybe we see some futa asuka on misato?

Last edited on 18 July 2017, 13:45.

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I love the progression from "tsun" to "dere" Asuka has made in this series. And thank god this one had no Mari

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@Dejanus

I agree on love for the dere but I couldn't hate Mari as much as most people do. In most of the others ESPECIALLY Summer Memories, she's pretty much the sole reason Asuka goes dere as fuck. Asuka being on the receiving end is hot as hell

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Why is there a nipple fuck tag?
Did I miss it or something or accidentally skip it?

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@user00 pretty sure cause like Asuka literally fucks rei with her nipple early on

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This is late to the party for sure, but you're a hero for doing this, chief.

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@vdate
thanks mate. Still waiting on the scans for his C92 doujin :(

https://e-hentai.org/g/1119210/bd84cea899/

Last edited on 02 October 2017, 23:08.

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