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[Aoi Hitori] Haramu Onna | The Pregnant Married Woman (COMIC Magnum X Vol. 26) [English] [Decensored]

[葵ヒトリ] 孕む人妻 (COMIC マグナムX Vol.26) [英訳] [無修正]

Free Hentai Manga Gallery: [Aoi Hitori] Haramu Onna | The Pregnant Married Woman (COMIC Magnum X Vol. 26) [English] [Decensored]
Posted:2017-05-14 08:53
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Language:English  TR
File Size:36.22 MB
Length:22 pages
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Posted on 14 May 2017, 11:17 UTC by:   Orion9137    PM
Score +191
So which upvote bot are you using? Because I refuse to believe anyone read the sequence "But I must..." "Do you mind if I go eat something?" "First in raw!" "Ah... Ok!" would ever give this a vote of 5.

Looking at your uploads do you do French rewrites then re-rewrite them over to English?
Posted on 14 May 2017, 13:45 UTC by:   nowittycomment    PM
Score +95
This is terrible.
Posted on 14 May 2017, 14:17 UTC by:   Evyy    PM
Score +33
@Orion9137

From a comment in https://e-hentai.org/g/1057662/a36e602a7a/ , he says if it is a rewrite, he'll put RW on the title. Lacking so, this is his genuine attempt at translating (JAP => FR I assume, then FR => ENG), but he claims to be a beginner at this.
Posted on 14 May 2017, 15:16 UTC by:   Arutima    PM
Score +41
The poor grammar is because it was translated from Japanese to French, then French to English in a literal way, without taking care of grammar.
Posted on 14 May 2017, 20:43 UTC by:   svines85    PM
Score +21
Good stuff, thanks a lot :)

Please don't tag this with the "poor grammar" tag unless you're willing to take the time to document it properly...

https://ehwiki.org/wiki/poor_grammar

It's got at least one veto vote on it now, if you need it taken off just post in tagging and abuse after being sure there's the required checklist posted here in the gallery comments...

https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=184081
Posted on 15 May 2017, 00:01 UTC by:   lazyazz    PM
Score +65
Examples of incorrect grammar, word usage, and/or sentence structure:
Page 1 - But I must... Do you mind if I go eat something?
Page 1 - First in raw!
Page 3 - I was advised about you... and not to listen to much to Mrs Rina
Page 4 - For once I've had found a pleasant partnership
Page 4 - When will you leave his poet's dick?
Page 4 - No I... I cum inside
Page 5 - Do you come home?
Page 6 - You're told to be skilled
Page 6 - And today starts your maternity leave
Page 6 - At the same time your having an affair with Mr Shirai

That's 10 easy mistakes in the first 6 pages, which is all that I can stand doing.
Posted on 15 May 2017, 23:53 UTC by:   Forgunia    PM
Score -17
Holy shit that woman is evil. Not only does she cheat on her husband, but she doesn't care either if the child is his or not.
Posted on 16 May 2017, 01:17 UTC by:   Love1sWar    PM
Score +12
@forgunia oh hey fresh mea-...i mean welcome, new guy, enjoy your stay at hotel NTR
Posted on 16 May 2017, 13:24 UTC by:   yadua    PM
Score +11
Aoi hitori makes good hentai as in art-wise but story-wise, it's meh. Or rather it's the same good ol' plot overused like hell, so in other words in tiring.
Posted on 16 May 2017, 17:34 UTC by:   Tiger1296    PM
Score +17
Wish there was a backstory, how did the dude get her in the first place?
Posted on 17 May 2017, 02:40 UTC by:   One Eyed Mercenary    PM
Score +36
@Forgunia
Ohoho a new guy. Welcome to the womderful world of NTR.
Posted on 20 May 2017, 10:45 UTC by:   eric0contact    PM
Score +12
@tiger1296
the 3 previous chapters (same magazine , vol 23-24-25) translation is in progress.
I discovered them after i did 4th chapter, as DMM describe each chapter as single.
I'll publish and reedit the full four chapters.
stay tuned ;-)

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