First translation Im sure its not great, maybe Ill try to do the second chapter when its out or something. Thank you for reading it.

Good work, thank you for your time for translating this!

Btw, why didn't use the tankoubon version? It has less censorship https://e-hentai.org/g/1298741/074d3c16e4/

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Thanks for translating and sharing, cute story. Typesetting is very good for a first release.

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Great little story, thanks for the translation. For a first time translation it’s pretty clean, keep up the good work man!

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It's shit.

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It's decent enough, for your first debut.

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"maybe I'll try to do the second chapter when its out or something"
the tankoboun already has the direct sequel https://e-hentai.org/s/a8074e365f/1298741-36 and less censorship
I suggest to check sadpanda for other source and not just the e-h version

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remember
a lot is two words
a lot

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Solid first try on typesetting, but there is room for improvements. I just took a short look on some pages and saw more than just a few words that where alone in a line for no good reason.
Before you you continue you should read a typesetting guide like: https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main
If you need more visit the "Cove of Scanlators" on the forum

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You might want to consider translating moans and the like

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>Hand holding

L-lewd

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Thanks for the TL.

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raw HOTMILK 2018-04

@Aelth; not sure why but fuck off

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