I have redone the first chapter slightly and translated the second chapter, using images from the tanko. I hope I did this upload thing right.

Good work, thank you for your time for translating this!

Btw, why didn't use the tankoubon version? It has less censorship https://e-hentai.org/g/1298741/074d3c16e4/

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Thanks for translating and sharing, cute story. Typesetting is very good for a first release.

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Great little story, thanks for the translation. For a first time translation it’s pretty clean, keep up the good work man!

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It's shit.

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It's decent enough, for your first debut.

Last edited on 01 April 2019, 15:09.

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"maybe I'll try to do the second chapter when its out or something"
the tankoboun already has the direct sequel https://e-hentai.org/s/a8074e365f/1298741-36 and less censorship
I suggest to check sadpanda for other source and not just the e-h version

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remember
a lot is two words
a lot

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Solid first try on typesetting, but there is room for improvements. I just took a short look on some pages and saw more than just a few words that where alone in a line for no good reason.
Before you you continue you should read a typesetting guide like: https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main
If you need more visit the "Cove of Scanlators" on the forum

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You might want to consider translating moans and the like

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>Hand holding

L-lewd

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Thanks for the TL.

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raw HOTMILK 2018-04

@Aelth; not sure why but fuck off

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