sorry for any mistakes.. if i recalled it correctly, i have change some (not a lot) of words placement so it makes better flow (subject-verb-object) when the dialogue use 2 or more text box for one sentence. but sometimes the hindrance that i found is... the text box is too small if i tried to change the placement, so when that happened, i just leave it as it is...
any comments are appreciated, hopefully i could publish translation for r-otome speed next week...

@fgsfds321 ,yeap you are totally right.... now that i seen it again...
i kinda tripped when i try to translate "uso"

btw if you read this, what do you think about the gasping noise "はあ", and the other variation of those ?
currently i translate it using:
waah, fuaah, haah...
any opinion on those?

Last edited on 10 June 2020, 10:27.

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Hahaha making it flow works just fine, as long as the dialog is coherent with the rest of the story and does not take away from the reader's experience. It is just fine and great work.

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trust me, i still make those mistakes with my translations

fgsfds321: based on the situation, I'd wager it's supposed to lean towards "no way", yea

Last edited on 06 June 2020, 08:49.

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You're getting better each time. :D I wonder about the "lie" on p45 panel 2. Was it intended as a "no way...!" type of exclamation, perhaps? It feels a bit out of place with "lie".
I'm so excited for next week though. :D

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"If I have a child with her, does that make me the king?"

Well known loophole, rape the princess, become king.

May want to hire a couple of guards though, doesn't seem to be many around, just letting citizens wander around the castle grounds.

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Raw can be found here: https://e-hentai.org/g/1311666/2b0d6c5b91/
Chinese TR: https://e-hentai.org/g/1405866/53db29ce16/

Thanks for sharing this!

In the same series: https://e-hentai.org/g/1648567/40ec18329e/

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This Artist is literally a God with the way he crafts the narrative, but the Art itself has a very unique style, love how he colors everything too, the guy's a mad lad. Great job on the translation!

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为啥露出区这个作者的作品一直重复发

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As always, SMAC is great, I just wish he'd stop with this bait and switch bullshit.

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Still hoping one day to see this and other works which need it provided with the "Ojou-Sama" tag ..... "OHHHHHHHHHH- HO-HO-HO-HO-HO-HO!"

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