I kind of don't like the typesetting. But I'm willing to overlook that. Let's see where this is going.Maybe we get murderfag before this is over! :D

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I'm gonna say it, god I wish I was abbey.

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Excited to see it continue

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so she was cheating with something to dull her senses

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good story, good layouts and scene composition
but your anatomy and line consistency is iffy and those faces need work

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I appreciate the constructive feedback, not many are willing to say what they do and do not like without giving a wider opinion but I agree with everything you said. My next work is gonna be a bit different and I can't say it'll adress anything but I'm very much gonna change the line and faces. I'm still studying anatomy but its a complex topic so itll take a bit of time but believe the next work will very much improve on my line work and faces, anatomy is more of a over time sort of thing in my experience

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