What in the actual fuck is this?

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I actually really like this. I know that most people despise rewrites, but this is well-written, and well-edited too.

The story has the same general points as the original. Some office workers get turned into sex-crazed slaves. The mind control is much more overt in this, while in the original it seemed more like "conditioning". I personally think the setup and writing is as good as the original.

I hope whoever is responsible for this does more, whether rewrites or original works. I want to read more.

Edit: @Mcmaniaxxx: Thanks for pointing me in that direction. I found the pool for this comic: https://hypnohub.net/pool/show/2969
Manipper seems to be Lorese.
Thanks again.

Last edited on 08 October 2020, 15:16.

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It is from hypnohub i think?

Base +5

yeah I should have mentioned that it was a manip somewhere in the title

Base +6

is this a god damn retool?

https://e-hentai.org/g/1422814/4e20cec030/

https://e-hentai.org/g/1516693/a5e7a633f7/

https://e-hentai.org/g/1624287/116cb57eb6/

Base +9, kyungri -6

You know what? For a re-write, this is actually pretty good! It's a nice read, and I can only tell it's a re-write at all because the writing style is a lot more western. Well, and the goofy effects are quite manip-looking. But it's some quality wank, if I'm frank!

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