Sup, I'm here once again with another cursed translation.
Though I did this one as I couldn't find this one translated yet.

On the other hand, this time I actually took some time to and hopefully brought some sense into this.
As in previous, I'm doing this mostly for myself, so don't excpect anything great.

Edit:

Seriously,
I get you, while both you and I would liked to see those hentai being properly translated. Unfortunately they seems to be either avoided(?), unknown or somehow unattractive to TL groups.

Mine translations are not being bad just for the sake of being bad (you were warned about it being terrible by the poor grammar tag) after all they end up like that because I am total noob when it comes to this.
Yet, they have another purpose (except for my practice). They are also meant to function like a piece red cloth in front of bull. The more is talked about it the higher the chance for good group to pick it up.

And for you, my beloved commentators, I won't be stopping anytime soon.
Your hate gives me energy to continue with this.
Oh, btw, WHY DON'T YOU DO IT YOUR SELVES?

Edit 2:

Btw sorry for some text being cut in half or being barely readable. Will have to use different app next time to prevent this.

Get the fuck outta here with this garbage. This quote below is taken verbatim from your Uploader comment from your previous gallery (https://e-hentai.org/g/1768429/0b83ef0b94/):

"I don't understand Japanese nor am I native English speaker. Most of the translation (well, all) was done by google translator, while I tried to bring some sense into it."
So you made shit up and passed it off as "English". Got it. Unless you miraculously got up to N1 or N2 Japanese proficiency within the span of a month, and also did the same for TOEFL (Test Of English as a Foreign Language), but I seriously fucking doubt it. All these users from your previous gallery also gave you advice on how to improve your translating, and rather than take it, you just fucking straight up ignored them and put out this flaming car wreck of a scanlation! DO YOU REALIZE HOW FUCKING INSULTING THAT IS?!?

Your editing is equally cancerous. Non-comic fonts, vertical fucking typesetting, non-centered bubbles, no redraws whatsoever (because fuck it, right?), jagged edges on your fonts, and your scans aren't even in greyscale. Not that you give a fuck about who reads it, though. Worst part about this is, you don't even need to be an editor to see how fucking awful this is. This shitlation of yours is so fucking bad that even Stevie Wonder can see how fucking terrible it is, AND HE'S FUCKING BLIND!! I'd offer you advice on how to improve, but based on how fucking well you took the advice of people who want you to improve your translating (I'm being fucking sarcastic here, btw.), I can easily see that you'd just fucking ignore it anyway like the ignorant fuck you are.

So you can't edit and you can't translate. If as you say, you're doing this for yourself: WHY THE FUCK DID YOU UPLOAD IT HERE IN THE FIRST FUCKING PLACE?!? I see absolutely no redeeming qualities in your work, which tells me everything I need to know about you: that you don't give a fuck at all. And for all that is good and just in our world, I hope for the love of fucking god that you never upload another fucking thing to e-hentai ever again. I'm fucking done with this massive dung heap of a shitlation.

EDIT: @hey2hell Again, using your own words "I get you... Mine (sic) translations have another purpose (except for my practice) "

No, you clearly don't fucking get it. Neither from the translation front, if you could even fucking call it that, nor from what you presume me, The Hentai Dragon, or the e-hentai community as a whole wants.
Being a total fucking noob is no excuse whatsoever for fucking something up THIS FUCKING BAD. Quick aside, rather than place the blame on yourself where it truly fucking belongs, you try to say your "app" cut off your text or made it barely readable. Bullshit. It's definitely you, you fucking ignoramus. You clearly don't fucking know how to typeset or even clean bubbles, the easiest fucking part of editing! So to dismiss this as your app's fault is fucking stupid, because everybody sees right through your bullshit.

For the audience reading, I'll provide a link to my very first editing project to show you what a complete noob like me (at the time) did: https://e-hentai.org/g/1064331/343236cc4b/.
The difference is easily apparent (not that you'll fucking look at it anyway, hey2hell), because through my work, I show that I care deeply about my reading/downloading audience with using an excellent translation done by Brolen and an equally good editing job done by me. I actually took the time to learn the fundamentals of editing inside and out before I even attempted to edit this tankoubon. I even explained in detail in that gallery's Uploader Comment everything I did to get good at editing. Hard work pays off, and it shows in spades through everything I do, especially works I've done for the Little White Butterflies (LWB) scanlation group.

So the fact that instead of trying to work on your own character flaws and improving yourself, you fucking make excuses to justify not doing better is fucking pathetic, even coming from a turd like you. Your pissant attitude and your clearly "I don't give a fuck about you" mentality makes me fucking sick to my stomach. Shut your fucking mouth and know your fucking place, whelp. Your shit doesn't belong on e-hentai, PERIOD.

Last edited on 07 December 2020, 20:51.

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Good comic, but I'm pretty sure that anyone of us can fix the grammar on this...provided that the "translation" is accurate.

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Before trying to translate anything into English, you should learn basic fucking grammar first.

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I only looked at the first few pages, and found these:

P1
Panel 2: "A weapon created by genetically modifying a beast from a remote planet with plasma-generating organs." instead of the convulated sentence that was originally used.

Panel 4: "over half the army is under the control", not "belong under the control".

Panel 5: "you can gain an advantage", not "you can gain advantage".

P2
Panel 4: "to prepare enough materials", not "to prepare enough material".

Panel 5: "succession war", not "successor war".

Panel 5: "Therefore", not "Therefor"

P3
Panel 2: "This method requires this weapon", not "This meathod requires for this weapon".

Panel 4: "Such a terrible thing", not "Such terrible thing".

At least eight errors in the first three pages alone. That definitely qualifies the "poor grammar" tag for this work.

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Ok, let’s back up a little.

What if:

-you’re a non-native English reader, with a poor grasp in colloquial stuff and grammar,
-your phone is a potato/you use low-res screens, and
-you forgot to put in your reading glasses.

Is this still readable?

No. Just take a look at page 2, the speech is cut off on the left side of some texts.

Really? How in the world did you even do THAT? Even if you load up the pic in Word and edited it, no way you can do that.

Please enlighten us. How?!

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The idea of this being readable is so far-fetched that I can only assume this is bait.

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Fuck off out of here with this shit.
This is BAD.
I think if we threw this to hungry animals, they'd attack us for giving them such horrid trash.
I really never knew you could botch something up THIS badly.
If you don't know English and can't edit, why do this?
This doesn't make ANY sense.
Buddy, if you plan on doing this to use more, let me give you some advice:
Cleanse your mind before translating.
Mix some bleach and some acetone together and breathe in deeply.
It helps relax the mind and promote clarity.
Good advice for you, hey2hell

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And here I thought machine translations were the worst.
Dear fucking lord.

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Really, why translation community slowly get populated by these kind of entitled asshats these days? Doing this kind of insult for yourself? Don't fuck with me, why don't you go kill yourself instead of ruining a book and killed the chance for give it decent translation it deserve?

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"Edit 2:

Btw sorry for some text being cut in half or being barely readable. Will have to use different app next time to prevent this."

It's called having fucking eyes. No "app" automatically crops or trims shit off without you both 1. Doing it on purpose and 2. Noticing. Fuck off. You didn't even clean this well, and this is coming from someone who translated, typeset, and cleaned in my off time after work and none of it is hard nor time consuming.

And nothing is better than something in this case.

Last edited on 07 December 2020, 00:59.

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Please don't use "WHY DON'T YOU DO IT YOUR SELVES" as excuse to publish unprofessional thing.
It's like you volunteered to painted a public wall, but you use poop instead of normal paint.

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Imagine a nuclear reactor needing maintenance and you are the janitor. You know nothing about nuclear physics or engineering, but you sure are good with a hammer and thusly proceeds to give the reactor a good beating. It is no wonder the thing blows up and leaves the entire area irradiated, barren and desolate.

In summary, people know that if they do something they have NO FUCKING CLUE ON HOW TO DO THEY DON'T FUCKING DO IT because you will FUCK IT UP! That's why a shit excuse such as "why don't you do it?" is a shit excuse and those who make it are whiny little shits trying to deflect criticism.

edit: corrected a word

Last edited on 07 December 2020, 05:19.

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I understand the frustration of not having stuff translated. I get it.

Really, I do. I look at hentai games, and I wish so many are translated because they are my fetish.

But just think of this. What you have done is like presenting a model volcano from a 11-18yr old science fair that a random kid made using YouTube tutorials to a Nobel Prize fair.

Except the volcano doesn’t erupt, the structure of the volcano looks like a valley instead of a peak, and it’s coloured pink.

You see, some people can tolerate that volcano doesn’t erupt. Ok, fine, that’s like machine translations - you get the gist, but it certainly will not draw the eyes of people who appreciate a fine model.

Some people will tolerate the volcano being pink. Ok, so you ran out of paint. That’s like not having the right font, the redraws, levelling, cleanups. I can still see it’s a volcano, and we’ll call the pink paint a case of “at least it’s not white”.

But you sir have made a model of a valley instead of a volcano, and called it a volcano. In parallel terms, what I mean is that you lacked any sort of care or attention to detail. Or just plain attention-seeking, but I’ll give you the benefit of the doubt. Sure, there could’ve been a volcano here somewhere, but unfortunately it looks like it got cut off at the edge...

When you posted this, I wouldn’t even have said anything had the text not been trimmed or cropped. I mean, you could have just gotten to MS Paint, drew a text box and pasted, right? But you didn’t check your work. Just as a kid looks at a subtraction question and starts multiplying things, you pasted your translation, and did not check it.

And all this? Posted on a site where professional re-drawers, editors and translators actually pool the end of their efforts into a collection of translated stuff for everyone to appreciate.

Just like a kid throwing in a model of a volcano that is pink, doesn’t erupt and looks like a valley in a Nobel Prize science fair with electron guns, Hadron Collider posters, electromagnetic microscope pictures and scientific posters.

And you wonder why everyone is mad, and act with so much dignity inside.

My advice? Check your work again. Before you post, check again. Because between the curses that is poor editing, machine translations and literally unreadable junk (in descending order of hate), you just committed all 3. And you will have no friends here, and people will simply take your name and put it in their blocked list. Instead of being given a chance to slowly develop.

Lastly, why do people not care for machine translations? Because if they just want pretty pictures, there are better places to look than manga and doujins.

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Is this guy the alter ego of that chinese autist who keeps uploading galleries watermarked "LOW QUALITY"? What's the deal with these shitbirds who seem to get off on posting terrible, low effort content?

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Where is the RAW of this?

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People who upload machine translation garbage like this should be banned from uploading.

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>Oh, btw, WHY DON'T YOU DO IT YOUR SELVES?

Challenge accepted commissioned some one to do it

https://e-hentai.org/g/2089105/06e98f3330/

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>Btw sorry for some text being cut in half or being barely readable. Will have to use different app next time to prevent this.
tagging rough translation

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