Missing translation in page 09.

Base +21, nikgtasa +11, xac3 +5

Great, now you've moved on to ruining Yokkora. Just a swell job all around.

Besides your extremely lazy editing (you can't even bother redrawing floating text), I've already exposed you for being a rewriter with an extremely tenuous grasp of both JP and EN just YESTERDAY. This isn't any different.

EDIT: adding tag based on Ass Spanker's comment.

Adding my own:

p.13 i'll give you loads of semen as you want => this doesn't make a lot of sense. "I'll give you loads of semen, like you want/as you requested."

Last edited on 15 February 2022, 20:20.

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Not gonna check the raw but I'm confident this is a rewrite. Enjoy my quick grammar check below:

Pg 02. `with full moon the libido increases-`
Pg 03. Please `shot` everything
Pg 06. `that shorts`. If it's not obvious enough, those are no shorts, those are bloomers. I don't even have to check the raw to know.
Pg 08. `an hopeless`
Pg 08. `my heart start bumping`. S-V agreement violated, and `bumping`?
Pg 08. `let it out everything`.
Pg 10. `you're ass covered with my cum`. This is 21st century's Shakespearean writing right here.
Pg 11. `you stare me`
Pg 12. `feetjob`
Pg 15. `everyday`
Pg 17. `What kind of costume can I wear next time?`

Supreme cleaning however, few editors can reach this level. No redrawing required, just slap new text boxes on everything. Leveling is for casual hentai enjoyers. Missed bubbles with text? Use your chakra to read them.

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I wait 3 years for a TL and I'm met with this?

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