Alright here it is, episode one, getting good but can't wait for episode 2
(I miss the inner monologue from the mom though, it's great in his other stories)

original https://e-hentai.org/g/2232436/0719154083/ (includes prologue)
prologue translation https://e-hentai.org/g/2237880/cf0548ef49/

Update: made some corrections

if there are any fans of the genre that want to proof read and offer constructive criticism before releases message me, I do proofread myself but its hard to notice your own errors

Good trick: write your script in Word or Google Docs. Most of your mistakes are embarrassing typos.

Rough grammar

every page: missing punctuation (periods, commas, question marks.) Your complete lack of punctuation is actually affecting your TL.

p.3 infront
p.3 embaressed
p.9 oh ya, just this and the other! => ?? this needs to be rephrased
p.15 definately
p.16 my finger's => fingers. clearly all of them
p.16 your feeling it too => you're
p.20 breast => breasts. talking about both
p.20 rub it on => rub it on doesn't work here. he's clearly sandwiched between them
p.21 boobs bouncing so nice => this isn't English
p.26 blow job => blowjob
p.28 feirce
p.32 embarassing
p.43 then long kisses then.. => ?? needs to be rephrased
p.45 cam => came

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p.5 "and you're big juicy ass..."

"and you are big juicy ass..."

YOUR, it is "your", "your big juicy ass"

p.40
"it's just like we're having sexy isn't it?"

SEX, "having SEX"

Last edited on 05 June 2022, 02:27.

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Yeah the grammar takes a bit off the action of the manga. Other than tat Hyji blew it out the park again, Can't wait for the next chapters.

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The previous chapter had poor sales. Already the author does not seem to care if his work has sales or not.

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If you aren't going to proofread your own translations, at least have someone check it for you before publishing.

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i like how this is part 1 to the story, yet there is alot that apparently has already happened

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@ hayatov18:
Well, people have been noticing how the writing lost quality with every new saga, and I personally disliked that we had to wait 3 complete chapters to see incest again, which it's supposed the identity seal of the story.

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I'm just tryin ta slam the sausage so I don't care about the grammar. 9/10 otherwise.

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这部灰司新作的序章和正篇我们众筹组已经汉化完了，不打算放流，希望有更多人加入我们，q2296680

Last edited on 11 June 2022, 13:49.

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没有母子的，硬不起来。

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@ Vile Mk 2

For me Hyji's incest story peaked at the 2nd Kinju Yuwaku story. the 1st and 2nd story from that series is one of the momcest masterpiece. after that hyji tried with CG format which flopped hard and not to mention he ruined the 1st story by having the son seduce the other milf despite he already fucked his mom

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这穿的不够色啊

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"The story of how i wound up like this with my mother" Ok so......how? Feels like we are reading a story with a missing chapter.

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New great story from Hyji

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I remember a time when this guy didn't use the same plot for EVERY work...

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New work just came out
https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_246497/?dmmref=DetailOtherWorks&i3_ref=recommend&i3_ord=1

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