Found this on Reddit
Translated by LoveHentai4Ever

Part 2

looks like a Japanese to Chinese then to English translation

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yeah back when this was posted on reddit I pointed out the errors to the "translator" but they weren't receptive to the feedback. in hindsight I probably should've done it publicly so that maybe uploaders like you would've avoided posting it here

002
OG: ありがと…
TL: N/A
ED: "thanks..."

OG: この乳もたまらんなぁ♡オスを興奮させる大きさや
TL: "These tits are unbearable. Your tits would make every man exited[sic]"
ED: "irresistible", "excited"

003
OG: ここの鎮守府ならオレの権力だけでも好きなように出来る
TL: "Do you even know who I am?"
ED: he's talking about the amount of power and influence he has on base allowing him to do whatever he wants, including making it dependent on the quality of her "service"

OG: キモッ…近づけないでよ
TL: "Don't get too close to me!"
ED: missing detail, she thinks he's gross

004
OG: 上層部からの視察という事でお偉いさんが来ることになってな
TL: "They're sending one of the big guys to visit us"
ED: some big shots in the top brass are coming to observe them

OG: 提督さんにはお世話になってるしね
TL: "Especially after everything this company did for me"
ED: she's saying she owes the admiral

OG: 一応…気をつけろよ…
TL: "I hope you can manage him"
ED: he's telling her to be careful just in case

005
OG: 最低ェ…
TL: 人渣
ED: this is left here from the Chinese scan ("scumbag")

OG: 流石アメリカンサイズのデカ尻メス臭と汗でイイ感じに蒸れてたまらんなぁ♥
TL: "Mhm, you have such a femine[sic] smell. I am sure that you will like my American surprise that I brought with me"
ED: he's saying she has a huge American sized ass and he can't get enough of her sweaty female scent

006
OG: このエロ尻にぶっかけてぇ
TL: "Hitting on this fat ass"
ED: he wants to plaster her ass

OG: キモイ！！ほんとムリ
TL: "Please stop!"
ED: she calls him gross and refuses to consent

OG: あーっ出るっ！！
TL: 啊-射了!!
ED: this is leftover from the Chinese scan ("Aah- I'm cumming!!")

007
OG: テカテカ競泳水着尻にぶっかけるぞ！！
TL: "I'm going to shoot my load on your gorgeous ass!!"
ED: he's talking about her shiny swimsuit

OG: なんか黄ばんでて臭いし
TL: "I feel so dirty and smelly"
ED: she's talking about the cum being yellowish and smelly

OG: フン…
TL: 哼...
ED: this is a grunt but the text is leftover from the Chinese scan

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On top of the botched translations, why mutilate the cover by slapping on a huge flag over it, without offering a version without it? Sheer hubris.

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