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(C102) [Dokudami (Okita Ababa)] Sewayaki na Osananajimi ga Dame Neet Aniki ni NTRreta Hanashi

(C102) [ドクダミ (沖田あばば)] 世話焼きな幼なじみがダメニート兄貴にNTRれた話

Doujinshi
Posted:2023-10-10 05:48
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Language:Japanese  
File Size:109.1 MiB
Length:36 pages
Favorited:493 times
Rating:
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Average: 2.76

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Posted on 10 October 2023, 05:48 by:   HaruLind    PM
Uploader Comment
"scan" with a phone by 4ch anon
he didnt 'scan" the cover, so I add
better than nothing, i guess...
Posted on 10 October 2023, 06:01 by:   Ineedanadult    PM
Score +12
The scan isn't great, but it can probably be made to look better if someone plays around with the levels in photoshop at least.

Edit: I think I'll take a crack at it, and reorder it to what 千喜鹤 is suggesting while I'm at it.

Edit 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/2702615/0ffc670ab9/
Last edited on 10 October 2023, 19:25.
Posted on 10 October 2023, 06:02 by:   JSQ947zyz    PM
Score +11
这扫图,有十几年前那味了,话说顺序乱了吧
Posted on 10 October 2023, 06:03 by:   karjce    PM
Score +6
와 씨발 이게 올라왔네 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Posted on 10 October 2023, 06:10 by:   reri.trip    PM
Score +48
(C102) [ドクダミ (沖田あばば)] 世話焼きな幼なじみがダメニート兄貴にNTRれた話 [Fax Machine]
(C102) [ドクダミ (沖田あばば)] 世話焼きな幼なじみがダメニート兄貴にNTRれた話 [Xerox Copy]
(C102) [ドクダミ (沖田あばば)] 世話焼きな幼なじみがダメニート兄貴にNTRれた話 [Facial Composite / Police Sketch]
(C102) [ドクダミ (沖田あばば)] 世話焼きな幼なじみがダメニート兄貴にNTRれた話 [Pigeon Carried, Cleaned Poop]
Posted on 10 October 2023, 06:18 by:   siapacakapni    PM
Score +12
@reri LMAO
Posted on 10 October 2023, 06:23 by:   iganasuK    PM
Score +2
I don't remember, but is there a reason okita ababa don't sell his stuff digitally ?
Posted on 10 October 2023, 06:33 by:   Ineedanadult    PM
Score +78
@iganasuK From what I recall he usually makes up some excuse. He doesn't have the time, or that it's too difficult. Every time someone asks him he either tries to avoid the topic, apologizes or says he might one day but never does.
Posted on 10 October 2023, 06:41 by:   nowittycomment    PM
Score +16
This is in reverse order.

This guys work always feels flat. There's nothing wrong with anything, I'm just not left feeling anything in particular.
Posted on 10 October 2023, 06:59 by:   wlk    PM
Score +23
扫图不说 怎么一堆草稿
Posted on 10 October 2023, 07:36 by:   F4c31t    PM
Score +23
這作者真的越來越擺爛zzz
Posted on 10 October 2023, 08:20 by:   mentosftw    PM
Score +75
Artist is too lazy to provide a digital copy of his own work, only the cover looks good, the rest of the doujin is only 60% complete at best. Only the heroine is drawn and everyone else looks like they came out of a sketchbook. 5 of these pages are a timelapse, some panels are just greyscale photographs, and the very last page is just a mockup.
Posted on 10 October 2023, 09:35 by:   gg0203    PM
Score -4
这种东西都敢拿出来卖
Posted on 10 October 2023, 10:08 by:   就不可能重名    PM
Score -4
感谢扫图,这个画师好几个感兴趣的本都不卖电子版的,这个作者的女主都画的很好看啊,不过做爱场景经常很潦草,这本放的草稿比前几本都多了……
Posted on 10 October 2023, 11:39 by:   千喜鹤    PM
Score +22
顺序好像是:封面,P36-P20,P11-P9,P19-P12,P8-P2
Posted on 10 October 2023, 12:26 by:   yy2252    PM
Score +6
为啥觉得做电子版麻烦?难道这个作者不是板绘,是纯手绘的???
Posted on 10 October 2023, 12:38 by:   xionghy615    PM
Score +6
看完了,全部颠倒了。
只能说男主给你机会你不中用啊。
Posted on 10 October 2023, 13:24 by:   BearImpact    PM
Score +6
感謝掃圖,這個作者的本,電子版我想花錢還不曉得去哪買
thanks
Posted on 10 October 2023, 13:37 by:   cvalesk    PM
Score +6
thank you for sharing.
Posted on 10 October 2023, 14:28 by:   vjbeal96    PM
Score +8
Wait what the hell is the premise. The thing is backwards and it's hard to tell whose who's when not all the characters are drawn.
Posted on 10 October 2023, 23:43 by:   e-diver    PM
Score +11
been awhile since the last time ive seen a real newspaper
Posted on 11 October 2023, 07:43 by:   ming56abc    PM
Score +18
首先叠个甲我是入了实体本的,别说什么白嫖党。应该有资格浅浅发表一下看法。我理解大家对于作者恨铁不成钢的心情。

1.ntr剧情铺垫是很重要,带入苦主也好黄毛也好,都需要大量剧情人物塑造来支撑。如果只想撸完一炮放空大脑真不建议看这位作者。为什么每次都是这样的安排呢,我觉得因为老师每次都是全新的独立故事,新的角色。重点不是XXOO戏份,而是想讲一个扭曲看完让人难受的故事,这可能是老师在艺术创作的追求。

2.说充数摆烂都敢拿出来卖什么的,这本会场贩卖价格是100日元,这个价格下有这个页数,我只能理解在做慈善,回馈粉丝或者可能是单纯不想窗了吧,不管内容多潦草,印到这个页数成本是不会低的,于我这类粉丝来说,有的看总比鸽了不出好。这本如果弄成100日元的廉价copy本形式,哪怕只有做爱的那三五页,我也觉得可以接受。实际这个价格能有如此内容我是超级惊喜的。
作者已经在推上就完成度低谢过罪了,白嫖伸手党也可以随便辱骂唾弃作者的话,我比较痛心。

3.关于不卖电子版我猜测可能是作者的某种个人坚持,艺术家总有些奇怪的执着点。欢迎有了解的大佬科普。可以去推特下留言或私信问作者电子版相关事宜,但如果问了作者还是不出是否应该尊重而不是抱怨呢?

4.这本的做爱场景秉承老师一贯风格, 只有短短6p,但分镜、动态、神情、已经比之前的精致很多。 有些人只看到了画面的低完成度,而我看到了作者对故事的把控能力、分镜功力的进化。

是网络获取信息太容易,大家都被养刁钻了么?关于拍照分享我也做过,初心是希望自己喜欢的小众漫画家老师能让更多人认识,或结识些同好。这种分享精神正是互联网发展的重要一环,无偿看了别人的分享还要骂一嘴踩一脚显得素质屌差。
我是不想拆书+没扫描仪的情况下看很久也没有扫图流出上传过几本。 没怎么组织语言,说的比较乱,还请见谅。
Posted on 13 November 2023, 14:45 by:   passwalks    PM
Score +12
感谢ls的说明,问一下老师有没有开P站赞助,个人可以赞助个500日元支持一下

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