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this entire thing is mtl

002
OG: よーし / よーし
TL: "Alright." / "Alright...let's do this."
ED: this isn't someone getting prepared for anything

OG: こうなった！？
TL: "What's going on!?"
ED: she's asking about how things came to be this way

OG: いい子ねー鈴仙ちゃん
TL: "Aren't you just a good girl, su-san?"
ED: wrong honorific, and her name is Reisen

003
OG: 月都製防犯ブザー
TL: N/A

OG: ほら純狐
TL: "Hey, Pure Fox."
ED: this is a literal translation of her name

OG: あなたが無愛想だから警戒されてるわよ？
TL: "Are you being cautious because I'm not the friendliest?"
ED: subject/object mixup

OG: 早くもマウント取られてる私を前にしてよく言えますね！？
TL: "Oh, coming from someone who's already claimed the high ground in front of me!?"
ED: she's talking about being mounted

OG: H₂ell おいしい水素血
TL: Hel, Delicious.
ED: missing detail, top and bottom lines

OG: トレンドの便乗が雑！！
TL: "Riding on the trend, huh, sloppy!!"
ED: sloppy is not the right definition to plug in here

OG: 今日は純狐からお願いがあって来たの
TL: "Got a favor to ask from Jinko today."
ED: her name is Junko, and subject/object mixup

OG: 純狐話してあげて
TL: "Tell me more about Jinko"
ED: her name is Junko, and subject/object mixup

etc

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Well, one more...

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I want see the dog walking role please

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